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    Lightbulb Love is Friendship Set on Fire

    I can't help it if there's someone else, tame my heart, just try it.

    I can only feel you
    If I go back to yesterday
    The shower on
    Hands pressed against the wall
    Water beating on my fore-head
    Haze coming off my body
    Vertical exposure
    Condensation tearing from my lips
    And then
    I think of you
    Vulnerable in your shower
    Dripping the way I am
    Opening up towards the sky
    Eyes closed
    Hands rising up
    Bending is submission
    Fingers through your hair
    Sweat beads off your skin like
    My tears have surrendered
    Cleansed your body
    Yet so sinful
    To have your beauty
    And then morning
    Doubting yesterday
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    Re: Love is Friendship Set on Fire

    Very cool. I like it. Keep up the work.
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    Re: Love is Friendship Set on Fire

    Ehehe, the first part was quite good, I guess...... but then the last part seemed to be written in a hurry. Its like all the events just came crashing down without a flow......

    But thats a nice idea, and I love the way that there are only 3-4 words in each line...... Good job
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    Re: Love is Friendship Set on Fire

    nice poem, it seems that you really love that person.

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    Re: Love is Friendship Set on Fire

    O M G
    That is a very sexy poem
    At least i love it *blushes*
    -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-
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    Re: Love is Friendship Set on Fire

    OMG, dude i hope this was in the heat of the moment thing coz this jus feels like it written during tht moment.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Love is Friendship Set on Fire

    It was in the heat of the moment and i could have done it better, but you know, you know.

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    Re: Love is Friendship Set on Fire

    LL! it's kool. i like it. although i would prefer it longer....

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