Is it Love or hate?

itachigirl · Oct 09, 2007, 05:39 PM

i hate you,
i love you,
i dont which one it is,
i get the same feeling for both,
sweaty palms, short of breath, shaking body,
they feel physically the same,
which is it?
i hate you, and blame you,
i love you, and miss you,
is one or the other,
or both?

perception is different,
that's all,
i feel as if i could kill you,
then bring you back to life,
there just some wounds that i cant heal,
that lead to both,
you're tearing me apart,
contradicting me,
innner conflict that i cant seem to erase,
god help me.

ihauntforlust · Oct 09, 2007, 05:55 PM

TTT.TTT

I know how you feel,

I've felt like this long time ago

So i can relate to this poem.

Really well done and I like this idea of your's about this poem...It really lets you think more deeply....ya know what i mean.

-Zainab

Raimann · Oct 09, 2007, 07:15 PM

rele liked this poem because i could rele relate to it. the flow was nice and the ideas were rele deep and made me think. nice job on this one, and keep writing

itachigirl · Oct 09, 2007, 10:45 PM

thx, 'cause tht's totally wht i was aiming for and for once i hit the target! i finally made a point in a poem!

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itachigirl Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: i could tell you, but id have to kill you Posts: 198 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 368	Is it Love or hate? i hate you, i love you, i dont which one it is, i get the same feeling for both, sweaty palms, short of breath, shaking body, they feel physically the same, which is it? i hate you, and blame you, i love you, and miss you, is one or the other, or both? perception is different, that's all, i feel as if i could kill you, then bring you back to life, there just some wounds that i cant heal, that lead to both, you're tearing me apart, contradicting me, innner conflict that i cant seem to erase, god help me. __________________ Misa misa is the second kira!!!! Last edited by itachigirl; Oct 12, 2007 at 07:32 PM.
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ihauntforlust Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In a house. ._. Posts: 224 Thanks: 1 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 6,397	Re: Is it Love or hate? TTT.TTT I know how you feel, I've felt like this long time ago So i can relate to this poem. Really well done and I like this idea of your's about this poem...It really lets you think more deeply....ya know what i mean. -Zainab __________________ [ײַ] þøק¢σяη├†┤.. ~: 3!
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Raimann Decapitation?DontBePicky! Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Toronto Posts: 660 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 7,854	Re: Is it Love or hate? rele liked this poem because i could rele relate to it. the flow was nice and the ideas were rele deep and made me think. nice job on this one, and keep writing __________________ Want Credits Fast? Love The Thrill Of Gambling? Then Come On Down And See For Yourself! http://www.animeonline.net/f5/nfl-football-31440/
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itachigirl Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: i could tell you, but id have to kill you Posts: 198 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 368	Re: Is it Love or hate? thx, 'cause tht's totally wht i was aiming for and for once i hit the target! i finally made a point in a poem! __________________ Misa misa is the second kira!!!!
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