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    Is it Love or hate?

    i hate you,
    i love you,
    i dont which one it is,
    i get the same feeling for both,
    sweaty palms, short of breath, shaking body,
    they feel physically the same,
    which is it?
    i hate you, and blame you,
    i love you, and miss you,
    is one or the other,
    or both?

    perception is different,
    that's all,
    i feel as if i could kill you,
    then bring you back to life,
    there just some wounds that i cant heal,
    that lead to both,
    you're tearing me apart,
    contradicting me,
    innner conflict that i cant seem to erase,
    god help me.
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    TTT.TTT I know how you feel,

    I've felt like this long time ago So i can relate to this poem.

    Really well done and I like this idea of your's about this poem...It really lets you think more deeply....ya know what i mean.

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    Re: Is it Love or hate?

    rele liked this poem because i could rele relate to it. the flow was nice and the ideas were rele deep and made me think. nice job on this one, and keep writing

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    thx, 'cause tht's totally wht i was aiming for and for once i hit the target! i finally made a point in a poem!

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