this is a very intense poem.....
when you read it...it actually gets you to think about love and hate and why are they so closely related...
the words coincide with the title perfectly and flow like a smooth river...
very nicely done!!!
Where has the heart beat gone?
That was full of love and passion,
Why does pain seem more like numbness?
That makes you feel nothing as you lash out
From the loss of it?
How does love and hate go together
So perfectly that with out hate love cant
Be passionate and full of embrace, it’s like
A fire that burns with out end making the
Love just ashes and the soul an empty
Shell.
When does the pain go away so
That love can feel like water falling
Over the edge into a pool surrounded by
Warm sandy beaches and a cool breeze on your cheek?
Where is the lover that was embracing his?
New life with the one he loved, where is the
Fire that burned when the love was so near? ,
Did it burn out and fade?
Nothing can be taken back because
Of the feeling that things just die
And change to make things new.
makes love and hate for ever bonded.
So the questions asked may be answeard but never
accepted which is why they are always asked........
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
this is a very intense poem.....
when you read it...it actually gets you to think about love and hate and why are they so closely related...
the words coincide with the title perfectly and flow like a smooth river...
very nicely done!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
wow this poem is deep ..^.^ u did a great job..this is amazing .I liked how u compared love and hate..they can be good things or bad things,,which is so true..and it makes u think about thoses two things in a different light..
I really liked this poem. Love should always be bigger than hate,but sometimes it isn't. I think if people spent more time loving than hating things would be so much better.
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