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    Love & Hate

    Where has the heart beat gone?
    That was full of love and passion,
    Why does pain seem more like numbness?
    That makes you feel nothing as you lash out
    From the loss of it?


    How does love and hate go together
    So perfectly that with out hate love cant
    Be passionate and full of embrace, it’s like
    A fire that burns with out end making the
    Love just ashes and the soul an empty
    Shell.


    When does the pain go away so
    That love can feel like water falling
    Over the edge into a pool surrounded by
    Warm sandy beaches and a cool breeze on your cheek?

    Where is the lover that was embracing his?
    New life with the one he loved, where is the
    Fire that burned when the love was so near? ,
    Did it burn out and fade?


    Nothing can be taken back because
    Of the feeling that things just die
    And change to make things new.
    makes love and hate for ever bonded.

    So the questions asked may be answeard but never
    accepted which is why they are always asked........
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Love & Hate

    this is a very intense poem.....
    when you read it...it actually gets you to think about love and hate and why are they so closely related...
    the words coincide with the title perfectly and flow like a smooth river...
    very nicely done!!!
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    Re: Love & Hate

    wow this poem is deep ..^.^ u did a great job..this is amazing .I liked how u compared love and hate..they can be good things or bad things,,which is so true..and it makes u think about thoses two things in a different light..

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    Re: Love & Hate

    I really liked this poem. Love should always be bigger than hate,but sometimes it isn't. I think if people spent more time loving than hating things would be so much better.
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