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| King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,202 | Love & Hate Where has the heart beat gone? That was full of love and passion, Why does pain seem more like numbness? That makes you feel nothing as you lash out From the loss of it? How does love and hate go together So perfectly that with out hate love cant Be passionate and full of embrace, it’s like A fire that burns with out end making the Love just ashes and the soul an empty Shell. When does the pain go away so That love can feel like water falling Over the edge into a pool surrounded by Warm sandy beaches and a cool breeze on your cheek? Where is the lover that was embracing his? New life with the one he loved, where is the Fire that burned when the love was so near? , Did it burn out and fade? Nothing can be taken back because Of the feeling that things just die And change to make things new. makes love and hate for ever bonded. So the questions asked may be answeard but never accepted which is why they are always asked........ |
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![]() Credits: 31,396 | Re: Love & Hate this is a very intense poem..... when you read it...it actually gets you to think about love and hate and why are they so closely related... the words coincide with the title perfectly and flow like a smooth river... very nicely done!!!
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![]() Credits: 7,420 | Re: Love & Hate wow this poem is deep ..^.^ u did a great job..this is amazing .I liked how u compared love and hate..they can be good things or bad things,,which is so true..and it makes u think about thoses two things in a different light..
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,326 | Re: Love & Hate I really liked this poem. Love should always be bigger than hate,but sometimes it isn't. I think if people spent more time loving than hating things would be so much better.
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