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    Love hurts...

    Love hurts so much that you will feel broken...
    But without love you can't live or feel...
    Sometimes love feels so good that you think...
    That you would like to embrace everything...
    Sometimes love hurst so much that...
    You will cry and feeling depressed...
    Maybe even broken and so fragile...
    You feel so small and alone, unwanted...
    You feel alot of pain in your heart...
    And the weirdest thing is you don't...
    Want to admit or accept that it is maybe over...
    You want to hope for an another chance...
    That maybe wont even come...
    That you will wait for the right person...
    And yet your broken, sad and depressed...
    Feeling small, fragile, alone and unwanted...
    But remember one day and that day will come...
    You will be destined with a person you love...
    It will not be now or right away...
    But one day in the future...
    So keep hoping, waiting even you feel like all of this...
    Cause it will happen...



    These are my feelings a bit on this moment...
    I know how it is to have it...
    You dont want it...
    Well I hope you like to read it...

    Bye Bye...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: Love hurts...

    Quote Originally Posted by mangalovertje View Post
    Love hurts so much that you will feel broken...
    But without love you can't live or feel...
    Sometimes love feels so good that you think...
    That you would like to embrace everything...
    Sometimes love hurst so much that...
    You will cry and feeling depressed...
    Maybe even broken and so fragile...
    You feel so small and alone, unwanted...
    You feel alot of pain in your heart...
    And the weirdest thing is you don't...
    Want to admit or accept that it is maybe over...
    You want to hope for an another chance...
    That maybe wont even come...
    That you will wait for the right person...
    And yet your broken, sad and depressed...
    Feeling small, fragile, alone and unwanted...
    But remember one day and that day will come...
    You will be destined with a person you love...
    It will not be now or right away...
    But one day in the future...
    So keep hoping, waiting even you feel like all of this...
    Cause it will happen...



    These are my feelings a bit on this moment...
    I know how it is to have it...
    You dont want it...
    Well I hope you like to read it...

    Bye Bye...
    you are making me cry i am so sorry please forgive me
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: Love hurts...

    Quote Originally Posted by awesomeparty12 View Post
    you are making me cry i am so sorry please forgive me
    I forgave you but these are still my feelings..
    It cant be helped...
    And dont cry okay...
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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    Re: Love hurts...

    that's really good, i don't know what to say... honestly.

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    Re: Love hurts...

    your poem was alright i liked reading it but it was kinda hard to read maybe you should make it into stanzas instead of paragraph form cuz i kinda got lost through some parts
    but other than that it was alright
    keep up the good work
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