Love I Got Back

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 04, 2007, 02:58 AM

I start to wake slowly
Feeling someone beside me
A smile playing across my lips
That was a night I'm glad I didn't miss

I looked around the not expecting to see you
To see you smile at me the way you did
Not after ending us so long ago
Not after what hurtful things I said

Walking slowly across the towards you
Is it me really me your smiling at?
Do you still love me he way you said you did?
Lets see lets put it to the test?

Leaning up in bed so I could watch you sleep
What an angel I have beside me
Moving some hair off of your forehead
Watching you wake slowly.

My smile getting even bigger
As your eyes open slowly
Cuddling closer to you
Laying there in your arms

Leaning up to kiss you
Whispering against your lips "I Love You."
Pulling back to see your smile
Your smile melting my heart

Looking up deeply into your eyes
Not believeing what I saw
You really did love me
When you said it so long ago

Never thought this would happen
Oh how many times I dreamed about it
To have you there beside me
You make me feel so loved.

Foolish to call you a liar so long ago
Smiling as I tell you again just how sorry I am
Closing my eyes before drifting off to sleep
Whispering what you mean to me and how much I love you.

That night I'm glad I never missed
For you are here with me now
Your love shown to me with just one kiss
The love I don't want to let go.

*equinn* · Jan 04, 2007, 03:09 AM

awww that poem is sooo sweet it melts my heart just to read it great job ^__^

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 04, 2007, 03:22 AM

Thank you that's my first poem too. Hope your really enjoyed it. This is how I feel with Sinistra. At first I thought he was lying but over the time I found out what what a fool I was being.

babepooh15 · Jan 04, 2007, 07:56 AM

this was a cool piece of work!!!!!!!! i love it!!!

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 04, 2007, 08:45 AM

I'm glad that you liked it Babepooh15. The only thing that I wish with this poem not saying that it isn't good but my punctuation is not that great and it's second rate. The poem I wanted to submit got erased when I typed it up. For you see I don't write it down on paper. It comes straight off the top of my head and I type it up. Last night for some reason my computer sent me back to the previous page and my poem was gone. I wanted to cry because some of the words I didn't remember but I sucked it up due to nothing is worth crying for. I came up with something almost as good and I hope you guys enjoy it. Even though it's in need of better punctuation.

evil_neko_youkai · Jan 04, 2007, 09:39 AM

I really loved it!!! Are you sure this is your first poem??? I hope to see more from you

Shinigami's_Angel · Jan 04, 2007, 11:09 AM

Wow!!! Is this really your 1st poem Ky-lyrra?! I thought that you did an amazing job!!! I really loved how you poured so much emotion into this.It truly show's how much your in love.

Awesome job and I can't wait 2 see more of your work.

LostbutFound · Jan 04, 2007, 11:15 AM

to my fellow poet i say GREEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 04, 2007, 11:23 AM

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I really loved it!!! Are you sure this is your first poem??? I hope to see more from you

Yes this is. Yesterday Angel inspired me that's why it was a good job.

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Wow!!! Is this really your 1st poem Ky-lyrra?! I thought that you did an amazing job!!! I really loved how you poured so much emotion into this.It truly show's how much your in love. Awesome job and I can't wait 2 see more of your work.

Thank you so much. When you have Sinistra like I do you will know why there is so much emotion in this poem.

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to my fellow poet i say GREEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you I don't think it's that great for my first one but still thank you all the same.

**Dragon Ball** · Jan 04, 2007, 10:14 PM

Yes, very sweet. Writing love poems can really be a good way to describe your emotions at times.

Thanks for sharing.

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 04, 2007, 10:34 PM

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Originally Posted by Dragon Ball

Yes, very sweet. Writing love poems can really be a good way to describe your emotions at times.

Thanks for sharing.

Why you are very welcome. I'm glade that you enjoyed reading. Thank you for also complimenting my poem.

Jan 04, 2007, 02:58 AM	#1 (permalink)
Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 5,059	Love I Got Back I start to wake slowly Feeling someone beside me A smile playing across my lips That was a night I'm glad I didn't miss I looked around the not expecting to see you To see you smile at me the way you did Not after ending us so long ago Not after what hurtful things I said Walking slowly across the towards you Is it me really me your smiling at? Do you still love me he way you said you did? Lets see lets put it to the test? Leaning up in bed so I could watch you sleep What an angel I have beside me Moving some hair off of your forehead Watching you wake slowly. My smile getting even bigger As your eyes open slowly Cuddling closer to you Laying there in your arms Leaning up to kiss you Whispering against your lips "I Love You." Pulling back to see your smile Your smile melting my heart Looking up deeply into your eyes Not believeing what I saw You really did love me When you said it so long ago Never thought this would happen Oh how many times I dreamed about it To have you there beside me You make me feel so loved. Foolish to call you a liar so long ago Smiling as I tell you again just how sorry I am Closing my eyes before drifting off to sleep Whispering what you mean to me and how much I love you. That night I'm glad I never missed For you are here with me now Your love shown to me with just one kiss The love I don't want to let go. Last edited by Ky-lyrra; Jan 24, 2007 at 01:30 AM.
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equinn Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland) Posts: 1,601 Thanks: 10 Thanked 19 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 16,054	Re: Love I Got Back awww that poem is sooo sweet it melts my heart just to read it great job ^__^ __________________
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Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 5,059	Re: Love I Got Back Thank you that's my first poem too. Hope your really enjoyed it. This is how I feel with Sinistra. At first I thought he was lying but over the time I found out what what a fool I was being. __________________ ™Soon To Be Mother™ Thanks For The Tag Aiora!
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babepooh15 Newbie Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Michigan Posts: 53 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 200	Re: Love I Got Back this was a cool piece of work!!!!!!!! i love it!!! __________________ poohs my boo
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Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 5,059	Re: Love I Got Back I'm glad that you liked it Babepooh15. The only thing that I wish with this poem not saying that it isn't good but my punctuation is not that great and it's second rate. The poem I wanted to submit got erased when I typed it up. For you see I don't write it down on paper. It comes straight off the top of my head and I type it up. Last night for some reason my computer sent me back to the previous page and my poem was gone. I wanted to cry because some of the words I didn't remember but I sucked it up due to nothing is worth crying for. I came up with something almost as good and I hope you guys enjoy it. Even though it's in need of better punctuation. __________________ ™Soon To Be Mother™ Thanks For The Tag Aiora!
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evil_neko_youkai Newbie Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: somewhere making the lives of others hell Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,960	Re: Love I Got Back I really loved it!!! Are you sure this is your first poem??? I hope to see more from you __________________
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Shinigami's_Angel In The Arms Of My Lover Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: In Axel's Closet!! watch's him sleep XD Posts: 687 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,351	Re: Love I Got Back Wow!!! Is this really your 1st poem Ky-lyrra?! I thought that you did an amazing job!!! I really loved how you poured so much emotion into this.It truly show's how much your in love. Awesome job and I can't wait 2 see more of your work. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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