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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,059 | Love I Got Back I start to wake slowly Feeling someone beside me A smile playing across my lips That was a night I'm glad I didn't miss I looked around the not expecting to see you To see you smile at me the way you did Not after ending us so long ago Not after what hurtful things I said Walking slowly across the towards you Is it me really me your smiling at? Do you still love me he way you said you did? Lets see lets put it to the test? Leaning up in bed so I could watch you sleep What an angel I have beside me Moving some hair off of your forehead Watching you wake slowly. My smile getting even bigger As your eyes open slowly Cuddling closer to you Laying there in your arms Leaning up to kiss you Whispering against your lips "I Love You." Pulling back to see your smile Your smile melting my heart Looking up deeply into your eyes Not believeing what I saw You really did love me When you said it so long ago Never thought this would happen Oh how many times I dreamed about it To have you there beside me You make me feel so loved. Foolish to call you a liar so long ago Smiling as I tell you again just how sorry I am Closing my eyes before drifting off to sleep Whispering what you mean to me and how much I love you. That night I'm glad I never missed For you are here with me now Your love shown to me with just one kiss The love I don't want to let go. Last edited by Ky-lyrra; Jan 24, 2007 at 01:30 AM. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 16,054 | Re: Love I Got Back awww that poem is sooo sweet it melts my heart just to read it great job ^__^ |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,059 | Re: Love I Got Back Thank you that's my first poem too. Hope your really enjoyed it. This is how I feel with Sinistra. At first I thought he was lying but over the time I found out what what a fool I was being.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,059 | Re: Love I Got Back I'm glad that you liked it Babepooh15. The only thing that I wish with this poem not saying that it isn't good but my punctuation is not that great and it's second rate. The poem I wanted to submit got erased when I typed it up. For you see I don't write it down on paper. It comes straight off the top of my head and I type it up. Last night for some reason my computer sent me back to the previous page and my poem was gone. I wanted to cry because some of the words I didn't remember but I sucked it up due to nothing is worth crying for. I came up with something almost as good and I hope you guys enjoy it. Even though it's in need of better punctuation.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,960 | Re: Love I Got Back I really loved it!!! Are you sure this is your first poem??? I hope to see more from you
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,351 | Re: Love I Got Back Wow!!! Is this really your 1st poem Ky-lyrra?! I thought that you did an amazing job!!! I really loved how you poured so much emotion into this.It truly show's how much your in love. Awesome job and I can't wait 2 see more of your work. ![]()
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![]() ![]() ![]() Credits: 17,197 | Re: Love I Got Back Yes, very sweet. Writing love poems can really be a good way to describe your emotions at times. Thanks for sharing.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,059 | Re: Love I Got Back Why you are very welcome. I'm glade that you enjoyed reading. Thank you for also complimenting my poem.
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