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    Love I Got Back

    I start to wake slowly
    Feeling someone beside me
    A smile playing across my lips
    That was a night I'm glad I didn't miss

    I looked around the not expecting to see you
    To see you smile at me the way you did
    Not after ending us so long ago
    Not after what hurtful things I said

    Walking slowly across the towards you
    Is it me really me your smiling at?
    Do you still love me he way you said you did?
    Lets see lets put it to the test?

    Leaning up in bed so I could watch you sleep
    What an angel I have beside me
    Moving some hair off of your forehead
    Watching you wake slowly.

    My smile getting even bigger
    As your eyes open slowly
    Cuddling closer to you
    Laying there in your arms

    Leaning up to kiss you
    Whispering against your lips "I Love You."
    Pulling back to see your smile
    Your smile melting my heart

    Looking up deeply into your eyes
    Not believeing what I saw
    You really did love me
    When you said it so long ago

    Never thought this would happen
    Oh how many times I dreamed about it
    To have you there beside me
    You make me feel so loved.

    Foolish to call you a liar so long ago
    Smiling as I tell you again just how sorry I am
    Closing my eyes before drifting off to sleep
    Whispering what you mean to me and how much I love you.

    That night I'm glad I never missed
    For you are here with me now
    Your love shown to me with just one kiss
    The love I don't want to let go.
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    Re: Love I Got Back

    awww that poem is sooo sweet it melts my heart just to read it great job ^__^

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    Re: Love I Got Back

    Thank you that's my first poem too. Hope your really enjoyed it. This is how I feel with Sinistra. At first I thought he was lying but over the time I found out what what a fool I was being.
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    Re: Love I Got Back

    this was a cool piece of work!!!!!!!! i love it!!!
    poohs my boo

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    I'm glad that you liked it Babepooh15. The only thing that I wish with this poem not saying that it isn't good but my punctuation is not that great and it's second rate. The poem I wanted to submit got erased when I typed it up. For you see I don't write it down on paper. It comes straight off the top of my head and I type it up. Last night for some reason my computer sent me back to the previous page and my poem was gone. I wanted to cry because some of the words I didn't remember but I sucked it up due to nothing is worth crying for. I came up with something almost as good and I hope you guys enjoy it. Even though it's in need of better punctuation.
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    Re: Love I Got Back

    I really loved it!!! Are you sure this is your first poem??? I hope to see more from you

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    Re: Love I Got Back

    Wow!!! Is this really your 1st poem Ky-lyrra?! I thought that you did an amazing job!!! I really loved how you poured so much emotion into this.It truly show's how much your in love. Awesome job and I can't wait 2 see more of your work.
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    to my fellow poet i say GREEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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