I love the way the sun hits your hair
How it lights up your eyes,
The way you smile tawards it like you've never seen it before.
I love you for you,
For your kindness,
For your inteligence.
I love the way you take my hand when the lightning comes,
How you squeeze when the thunder sounds
How you fall to unsteady sleep in my arms.
I love you for you,
For Your touch,
For your humor.
I love the way you look at me when you know I'm hiding something,
How your hurt but determinded by my secrets
The way you always find out.
I love you for you,
For your smell,
For your Forgiveness.
I love the way you don't care what others think of you
The way you shake off insults,
How you always look on the bright side.
I love you for you,
For your confidence,
For your smile.
And I always will...
Last edited by darkness of an angel; Mar 22, 2007 at 02:13 PM.
This is anything but boring, or ordinary. It feels so real. Its easy to write a love poem. But its not easy to write your TRUE emotions out. You've written about what love truely is... In my opinion there was nothing boring about it. Post with confidence!
... Not Ever Again...
I like it. Its not boring, it shows how you feel about someone.
its ok, i like it too. very precise.
although if its possible
you should avoid repitition of words
because it may sound like you are
making a song instead of a poem.
Expand your ideas, explore your vocabs..
If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
I don't mind and you don't matter
awww this poem almost made me cry its so sweet!
good job!
oh it is soooo sweet!
i love it! it made me want to cry to!
IN THE END IT DOSENT EVEN MATTER
wow you people like my poem
I have as much skills then my brother when he's fighting(lozer)
but well you like my poem woopdedo.
lol dont say that darkness
you did a great job with that one
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