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    Love(A poem you'd love to read)

    I love the way the sun hits your hair
    How it lights up your eyes,
    The way you smile tawards it like you've never seen it before.

    I love you for you,
    For your kindness,
    For your inteligence.

    I love the way you take my hand when the lightning comes,
    How you squeeze when the thunder sounds
    How you fall to unsteady sleep in my arms.

    I love you for you,
    For Your touch,
    For your humor.

    I love the way you look at me when you know I'm hiding something,
    How your hurt but determinded by my secrets
    The way you always find out.

    I love you for you,
    For your smell,
    For your Forgiveness.

    I love the way you don't care what others think of you
    The way you shake off insults,
    How you always look on the bright side.

    I love you for you,
    For your confidence,
    For your smile.


    And I always will...
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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    This is anything but boring, or ordinary. It feels so real. Its easy to write a love poem. But its not easy to write your TRUE emotions out. You've written about what love truely is... In my opinion there was nothing boring about it. Post with confidence!
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    I like it. Its not boring, it shows how you feel about someone.

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    its ok, i like it too. very precise.
    although if its possible
    you should avoid repitition of words
    because it may sound like you are
    making a song instead of a poem.
    Expand your ideas, explore your vocabs..

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    awww this poem almost made me cry its so sweet!
    good job!

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    oh it is soooo sweet!
    i love it! it made me want to cry to!

    IN THE END IT DOSENT EVEN MATTER

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    wow you people like my poem
    I have as much skills then my brother when he's fighting(lozer)
    but well you like my poem woopdedo.

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    lol dont say that darkness
    you did a great job with that one

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