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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    Awww that is sssooooo beutiful. I think I might vry. I love it sooo much.
    I ish I had someone like you.lol.
    I can't wait to see more of your poem.(^.^)

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    i wish i had some one like him to!
    and i really wish i could write like that to!

    IN THE END IT DOSENT EVEN MATTER

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    Very sweet poem. It's so nice to know that there are still people like you who loves someone for who they are.
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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    I agree with the others - it didn't seem like a boring poem to me. You do know how the theme "Love" is such a common one, and even though I think yours had a certain unique touch to the theme, I think it can still do more to rouse my full interest.

    Strongest point of your poem is the sincerity of it - it all felt true to me, and so it made your poem moving and emotive, giving it power. I think your title needs some more work, though. Love is a common theme - think of something that makes your love-themed poem different and more interesting than others and get your title from that. Remember, if you're going to post your poem for comment, the first thing that'll get our notice is your title.

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    well thanks for the comments guys,
    I'll work hard with my titles for the poems I make.
    Well thanks and all.

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    Unlike most ordinary poems,the feelings that are real is the great aspect to this poem.It is emotional and that is what i like.

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    There is nothing boring about it, buddy ^_^ I loved it. I know how you feel. Keep it up!

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    Re: Love(just a boring poem I wrote)

    thank you everybody for your nice comments
    the poem you have read really happened.

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