One thing that made the poem loose its touch was the repetition of the words "he/she", besides the length of your poem.
But even so I like your imagination, your creativity to produce warm feelings and emotions inside the reader. Great job ^_^.He/she will love you and love who you really are.
He/she might find out little thing about you,
that he/she doesn't like but he/she will accpect them.
He/she will just want you to be happy with or without him.


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