HolderOfTheDarkChalice

Every moment , can be said to be alive,
It has its rainy day's,yet the rainbow alway's
show's up , only in my heart does the blue
sky stay's forever because of you.

The sun it very bright the flower's
and the warm breeze just take me away'
i love you forever and a day , you are my heart
i can't live without you, becuase your my daily bread for love

The moment is gone you lied to me .flames
destroy our once peacefull place spot,
the rainbow now gone the stormy clods now stay,
how can my heart be so blue and full of sunshine?


Sun turns to blood as my thought of you go down
and the warm breez turns into a hurricain ,everything
i ever gave you turn's todust in my thought's now.oh
how i hate what you have done to me.

My love for you there's no word that can descirbe you
like the pedal's of a rose your so fragile yes so lovey,
everthing thing we do it's like nothing could go wrong,
i will always love you,nomatter how it goe's.

The moon above it share's its romantic light with us
as we hold eachother other tight it cant be wrong,
the star's up above there like spot lights on our love
this night with you, how i wish it could be forever.

Dawn is here death is now everywhere you're love
for me desrtoyed it all nothing where ever be the
same,the moon above turns blood red as i kill
our love,the stars above are like judges on me,
as there twinkes fade's from me.

If only we had never met i would be happy
like i was , no more lies from you ,it just
ruins everything i think of you,how i wish
that you were dead but i know you will one day.

ok this poem was a bit difficult for me since i never
tried once like this and never read one like it
before. but i was going for two points of veiws
from two people who knew eachother one loved the
other hated and those are the lies they told so as it makes since
to anyone who read's it. yea it still has alot opf error's lol
but this one was sort of hard since i ner done one like this before.
any comments or sugestions on how to make anotherr like this would be cool

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Shinigami's_Angel

Wow! This was soooooooooo awesome big bro! I loved it! Such powerful emotions comeing from this poem,awesome! Awesome job big bro

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KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR

wow, this poem it's really good, i can feel the hate & love at the same time, it's deep as well, it shows the two sides of love, and i can identify with some parts of it. nice poem (:
though you should be careful with ur spelling ^-^

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HolderOfTheDarkChalice

lol yea i know i will benext time but i was busy trying this difrent way to notice
the spelling i did go back sevral time but i dont know i still missed alot lol
but i ammglad you liked it anyway and thank you.
@ raja you pointed out what this poem is about and i like how you saw that
not many people would

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BlueFox1

Man the emotions in this poem are awesome! The keep the reader guessing, one minute your pouring your heart out and the next a vengeful hate comes out toward the other person! Outstanding job on this Bro!

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Rave_Grip

Such a wonderfull poem, and yes you did a great job describing different views No need to worry about the errors, it's really good ^_^

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princesslady

wow. that was so emotional!!!! so good. very emotional and nice.

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Sincere

The sad thing is that this happens a lot. Too much. Good people deserve to be loved and not pushed aside by the bad people. As for the poem itself, I thought it was well written with how you described how you felt and what happened. Nice job.

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powerxxx

wow , that was pretty amazing
you showed the tow sides of love , and the way you wrote it was pretty awesome
the poem was emotional and very deep
you gave a very nice flow to the poem ,
this was a great poem
nice work and well done
keep it up

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Dark wolf

very good poem sounds like love can mislead but brings something else and also you have very good emotions in this one

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