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    Re: Love Lies

    The sad thing is that this happens a lot. Too much. Good people deserve to be loved and not pushed aside by the bad people. As for the poem itself, I thought it was well written with how you described how you felt and what happened. Nice job.
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    wow , that was pretty amazing
    you showed the tow sides of love , and the way you wrote it was pretty awesome
    the poem was emotional and very deep
    you gave a very nice flow to the poem ,
    this was a great poem
    nice work and well done
    keep it up
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    Re: Love Lies

    very good poem sounds like love can mislead but brings something else and also you have very good emotions in this one
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    Re: Love Lies

    wow, its brillent, i realy dont know what to say i just love it it a perfect way to discrybe how i felt a while ago, im just speechless

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