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    To a love long lost.

    For what I've seen
    and in missing what I've lost,
    I tend to find
    just how much living life costs.

    Being without you
    is tearing me apart.
    My heart misses you
    from when my day starts.

    You told me you loved me
    and that I was like no other,
    but as I see you now
    you are happy with another.

    I can miss you forever
    and allow me feelings for you to never change,
    but life here with out you
    is like reading an empty page.

    I know you love me
    but my hurting heart is refusing to care
    because it's hard to tell you I love you too
    when you refuse to be there.

    I know it may not matter
    but forever I would wait
    just to take you out
    on one silly date.

    I am speaking now to you,
    all from my heart,
    to tell you now
    being without you is tearing me apart.

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    Re: To a love long lost.

    Hmm well i think that was a very nice touching poem, it really is great. The only thing i have a prob with is ur slight language prob, just a few mistakes but wel done

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    Re: To a love long lost.

    Quote Originally Posted by Rinkusu View Post
    Hmm well i think that was a very nice touching poem, it really is great. The only thing i have a prob with is ur slight language prob, just a few mistakes but wel done
    Mistakes? what mistakes
    i dont write mistakes
    i write that way on purpose
    i fix my mistakes so there is the final result MISTAKE FREE. thanks.

    Every poet writes the way they feel.... many famous poets intentionally spell wrods wrong do you hate their languages... I see nothing wrong with the way i wrote this poem. I worded it the way i did as if i were to be saying it to the person it is for .

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    Re: To a love long lost.

    wow... Touching poem... So, i can take it your lover left you.. I'm sorry to hear that.

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    Re: To a love long lost.

    Quote Originally Posted by darkangel1240 View Post
    wow... Touching poem... So, i can take it your lover left you.. I'm sorry to hear that.
    yes she did and ill get over it i guess lol.but thanks for the comment n ur concern

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