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Reply With QuoteHmm well i think that was a very nice touching poem, it really is great. The only thing i have a prob with is ur slight language prob, just a few mistakes but wel done
For what I've seen
and in missing what I've lost,
I tend to find
just how much living life costs.
Being without you
is tearing me apart.
My heart misses you
from when my day starts.
You told me you loved me
and that I was like no other,
but as I see you now
you are happy with another.
I can miss you forever
and allow me feelings for you to never change,
but life here with out you
is like reading an empty page.
I know you love me
but my hurting heart is refusing to care
because it's hard to tell you I love you too
when you refuse to be there.
I know it may not matter
but forever I would wait
just to take you out
on one silly date.
I am speaking now to you,
all from my heart,
to tell you now
being without you is tearing me apart.
Hmm well i think that was a very nice touching poem, it really is great. The only thing i have a prob with is ur slight language prob, just a few mistakes but wel done
Mistakes? what mistakesOriginally Posted by Rinkusu
i dont write mistakes
i write that way on purpose
i fix my mistakes so there is the final result MISTAKE FREE. thanks.
Every poet writes the way they feel.... many famous poets intentionally spell wrods wrong do you hate their languages... I see nothing wrong with the way i wrote this poem. I worded it the way i did as if i were to be saying it to the person it is for .
wow... Touching poem... So, i can take it your lover left you..I'm sorry to hear that.
yes she did and ill get over it i guess lol.but thanks for the comment n ur concernwow... Touching poem... So, i can take it your lover left you..
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