''Love is ment to be''

It tells inside
dont get caugh with foolish pride
dont have things to say
only u and me
belive in us
we were ment to be
for eternity
heaven no!
its not the way it should be
not the way it could be
dont u know theres no need to leave
i just want to please u and give u all the love u need
tell me please
are u here forever and more?
so silently
just listent to me one time
im not talking just for play
is things i need to say
i just wanna love u
u and me going through our eternal fantasys
i never want to lose u
is not the way it should be
our love is really ment to be

nice, but i just not into that kinda poem. i just like more of the descriptive ones.

keep it goin though.

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Originally Posted by fayt lingod

nice, but i just not into that kinda poem. i just like more of the descriptive ones.

keep it goin though.

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u mean describin life or sorts?

describin anything. i just don't like love poems or those with a subliminal love theme.

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Originally Posted by fayt lingod

describin anything. i just don't like love poems or those with a subliminal love theme.

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ill try making something different then.

make watever you want.

poetry pleases YOU not the audience.

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Originally Posted by fayt lingod

make watever you want.

poetry pleases YOU not the audience.

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some how i make th poems with apreciation but ye right at some point but i wanna make a poem that evryone likes.

it's impossible to make something everyone likes.

i'm getting a little too sappy here (even remembering my G's) so i gonna stop postin here.