Nice poem but dont insult your pride that way...pride is not always bad....
Nice poem man, i can see that you didn't use qoute marks this time.
Nice poem but dont insult your pride that way...pride is not always bad....
I didn't notice this. lol I like it. keep it up!
"I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
It's so pretty. I like it. Keep it up!!!
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that poem is very good
keep on writing , you will top that in no time
Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
I Fly Swiftly through the air
I Spread My Wings Without A trace
very cool poem about love that is meant to be
and i think eberyone has that moment where its
meant to be good or bad depending on your actions
in a way the poem sort of desrobes alot of people
that have what they want when it comes to love
great peom
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
That's pretty good. Keep up the good work.
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