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    "a love that never last"

    Near to the door
    he paused to stand
    as he took his class ring
    off her hand
    all who were watching
    did not speak as a silent tear
    ran down his cheek
    and through his mind
    the memories ran
    of the moments they walked
    and ran in the sand,
    hand and hand
    but now her eyes were so terrible cold.

    for he would never again
    have her to hold
    they watched in silence
    as he bent near
    and whispered the words..

    "I LOVE YOU" in her ear
    he touched her face and started to cry
    as he put on his ring and wanted to die
    and just then the wind began to blow
    as they lowered her casket.

    into the snow....
    this is what happens
    to man alive.....
    when friends let friends....
    drink and drive.

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    Re: "a love that never last"

    Awwww.....it seems so cute and romantic well to me cause well YEAH!!!! It's ust love!!!! I hope to read more of your awesome poems!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: "a love that never last"

    awwwwww thats reali sweet!!! good poem!! u seem to be hurting in this poem!!!!


    thank you equinn!!!!!!

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