basilisk888

All of the new,
All of the old,
I can't see,
I’m not that old,
I’m sad,
I have not glee,
I hoped you would never go from me,
I was a fool,
I did not see,

You were there,
You were not blind,
You had a heart,
You had a life,
You never told,
You left on a dime,

I always hoped,
I gave up hope,

You will never come,
You are gone,

I could have tried,
I could have tried,
I’m sad,
But I could have tried…

-love never reached

this was a true time in my life and because of it I'm now writeing to get away from the feeling of emptyness... Never again will I see her so I named a person in a story I'm writeing off of her *sigh*

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crimson

it was nice, really nic actually... i could realte to it in a way or another... just one gramattical thing:

anyway... i liked the way that the lines were short, it added a rythmic patter to the way you read it, it makes you feel more into the poem than normal...

keep up the good work!

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basilisk888

well if your reading this Erica now you know T.T
-from the boy who was alone

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