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    A love Poem.

    Love is strong yet delicate.
    It can be broken.
    To truly love is to understand this.
    To be in love is to respect this.

    I think this poem can be to true.

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    Re: A love Poem.

    hey i like it alot it's cool

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    Re: A love Poem.

    i wish it would have been longer but the sentament is sweet
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: A love Poem.

    this is the shortest poem i've read n it's sweet.

    Love is alot of things n more than wut this poem says coz it's missing out on the feelings

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: A love Poem.

    I didnt get any emotion from this poem. Because you were dealing with a strong emotion, the poem should have been strong. Even if you're going to make one stanza. The words in that stanza should be strong and heart felt.
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    Re: A love Poem.

    I agree with kasai, it was too short and there wasn't any emotions.

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