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    love poem

    I close my eyes I feel, hear you beside me...

    I wish it was all true...

    My heart droned in beauty and love in what is yours.



    I wish we were together...

    I want to kiss you

    I want to hug you

    I want you...



    But to want isn’t enough I need to work for this...

    I need to truly be worthy of your love.




    I DON'T care about age difference...

    To me it’s only a number it means NOTHING!

    I love you too much to care for silly numbers...



    Your love means much more...

    We were meant to be...

    You’re always on my mind...

    I dream of you

    awake just to be with you...

    You mean the world to me...



    My family or friends won’t make me feel different about you...

    You’re my oxygen I can't live with out you...

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    Re: love poem

    ahh so beautiful and totally exresses an emotion that I've been unable to confront as of late... Thank you for this ^_^
    Although just to be a jurk and make some sort of criticism... (Keep in mind that I actually love this and only criticize to allow you to grow.) I think that it could honestly be more in depth and (if only a little) better explore and express those emotions although the unwritten word has a massive effect in your head to readers who don't know where you are comming from this will seem like just another love poem.

    ... and join my rebellion against time.

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    Re: love poem

    yea maybe sooo but keep in mind im not the most smart person on ao XD lol and knowing me ill use some good words but they will end up confusing the whole thing ^^

    but thank you for the comment

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