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    Love Poem again XD (sorry cant come up with a title)

    In a middle of gunfight,
    In a centre of the storm,
    They wage a war against your faith in me,
    Your eyes will never be the same,
    The life stirring within them.

    I watched you as life went by,
    Your eyes were lifeless like a barren world,
    You sought no comfort in others,
    In a world of money,
    There was no place for love
    I forced it in your life,
    As I courted you,
    Annoyed you even as you rejected again and again,
    But I could see that you enjoyed someone soughting after you.

    Finally you accepted me into your life,
    As I stand over you, protecting our fragile love,
    They'll never to take me down like our love.
    Like a bullet through a flock of doves,
    They'll never make our love waver.
    As the guns in my hands kick back,
    These bullets are my Valentine present,
    As I continue fighting and resisting,
    I will continue to love you always.

    As comment on this poem.....all critisms are accepted

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    Re: Love Poem again XD (sorry cant come up with a title)

    wow.

    simply awesome as ever, Blade-san!! *claps* i love the part:

    Like a bullet through a flock of doves,
    They'll never make our love waver.
    that is a great one... such feelings were conveyed in a very artistic way... ^^ i love it... blah... i love all your works anyways!! ^o^ keep it up! ^_^

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    Re: Love Poem again XD (sorry cant come up with a title)

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    As I stand over you, protecting our fragile love,
    protecting our fragile love .... oh-- i love this part a lot....XDDD <3
    it`s about the guys true feeling towards the girl *heart melts*
    very very nice poem... too sweet... *bow to blade-san* simply amazing....
    like the way you write out the guys feeling.. ^^
    aw--- too bad , no title for this sweet poem.. Y_Y

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    Re: Love Poem again XD (sorry cant come up with a title)

    it's beautiful... the way you focus on love. . .
    why is everyone in the world full of love...
    something i can never understand.
    er.. good poem! keep it up! GENKI! ^^
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    Re: Love Poem again XD (sorry cant come up with a title)

    Blade....this poem is awesome!! oh my god...I love it!! Its really deep...and captures the moment....wow...so pretty.....*sniff* i really like it.....its really good.


    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    Like a bullet through a flock of doves

    OOoooh!!! this line is from a song sung by MCR!!! ^ ^
    Last edited by B.a.n.g.B.a.n.g.; Jun 17, 2006 at 11:09 AM. Reason: Automerged Doublepost

    Thankx Pyro, for this awesome sig! ^ ^




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    Re: Love Poem again XD (sorry cant come up with a title)

    O.o ur love one, is very lucky 2 have u. keep on writing..or typing XD


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    Re: Love Poem again XD (sorry cant come up with a title)

    Nice poem!!! So your in a gunfight with some chick then you relize you love her!

    As the guns in my hands kick back,
    These bullets are my Valentine present,
    Wait so your shooting at her or to protect her?
    Lol nontheless you have talent! Look forward to your next piece of work!

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