love and rain...

This is my first lil poem, but im not really a poet. I tried my best tho, so i hope you like it. :thumb:

I don't have a past...i just have a chance.

Safe to stay from here....your getting closer to me.

we will never love...cause we are not allowed to be.

The rain pours on me...could this be her love?

To lie here under you...is all that i could ever do.

I walk around her love...so i can find the way around.

I learned to love it and hate...I learned to call the sun and the rain.

I chase the rain...it chases me.

I follow her...she follows me.

Cut these ropes...that hold me so.

Her love pours on me...could this be her rain?

To lie here beside you...is all that i could ever do.

I'm soaked with her rain...I'm soaked with her love

yes i am first post i like it even though i usually dont like love poems. but it is a pretty good poem

this is meaningful ^_^ what a connection!
post more and keep it up ^^ baa~

this is what love is like not many kids your age can
put into words but you did pretty good awesome poem

thank you Heartless mage, Aya-kun and holder (chris) for the wonderful comments. You have encouraged me to write more...if i feel like it lolz.

awwwe

i like it ^ ^ keep it up!

*blushes* Thank you B.a.n.g.B.a.n.g. (Lavie-san). thank you for giving me more encouragement :).