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  1. Jun 18, 2006 08:07 PM #9
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    Re: Love-Shell (more a thought than a poem)

    thanks to every1 .
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    Re: Love-Shell (more a thought than a poem)

    Quote Originally Posted by Hitokiri Battousai
    Love Shell

    This is a not some high school thing

    This is more than just a crush

    I feel lucky I found this love

    Because after this,

    Ill love no more.
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    i likey this part! keep goin! rock on!

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    Re: Love-Shell (more a thought than a poem)

    Quote Originally Posted by royal cutie pain
    i likey this part! keep goin! rock on!
    does it rhymes a little? LOL
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    Re: Love-Shell (more a thought than a poem)

    lol it is really hard to express yourself to the chick you like! lol man nice poem.
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  5. Jun 20, 2006 06:12 AM #13
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    Re: Love-Shell (more a thought than a poem)

    i really enoyed that one!! nice work!!! ^_^
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

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    Re: Love-Shell (more a thought than a poem)

    Nice work! lol I agree its hard expressing your feelings to a girl that you liked but you did a good job. Keep your work up! You do indeed write good poems!
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  7. Jun 20, 2006 06:48 PM #15
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    Re: Love-Shell (more a thought than a poem)

    ty, i really apreciate it
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    Re: Love-Shell (more a thought than a poem)

    unable to express the love u have for someone.......i feel tht u were rejected n decided to nvr open ur heart again or........u were accepted n both of u love each other n marry? guessing here but anyways.....looks like short pomes are the trend now......good one .....keep it up

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