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    Love Sick (part 2)

    That's it! I give up!
    If you want him, then keep him.
    Just please know that this
    is hurtin' my feelings.

    I was so damn sure
    you were gonna return.
    But now you say you can't;
    I'm tired of being hurt.

    I love you so much!
    I should've just moved on.
    INstead of waiting for the day
    I'd keep you in my arms.

    Sorry if I sound pissed.
    I'm not mad, just hurt.
    And I've tried for too long
    to not feel like dirt.

    It's like the angel in you
    sensed the demon in me.
    Because before today, I
    thought I was your everything.

    But I'm not gonna trip,
    I won't throw a fit.
    I just wished that it was me
    you chose, instead of picking him.

    So once again, here I am.
    Alone--no longer confused.
    Still dealing with the loss,
    still in pain from the bruise.

    I guess I'll never be happy,
    I'll never be loved.
    No more hope or patience;
    Wait for you? Naw, I'm done.

    The battle's over, I lost.
    I can see that now.
    But, can I deal with defeat?
    I really don't know how.

    Good luck, I'm sure you'll need it.
    Take it as far as you can.
    Just know I'm done tryingto
    regain my status of being your man.


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    Re: Love Sick (part 2)

    aww its so good yet it is so sad, *sniff sniff* I love it!!!

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    Re: Love Sick (part 2)

    lol Shippos comment is sooo funny... nice work on cheering up Shippo.

    I like this poem, it's fool of emotions- anger and sadness (more sadness though). I really didn't like this part:
    I guess I'll never be happy,
    I'll never be loved.
    No more hope or patience;
    because I don't like you being so pessimistic... ^^ have hope, would you?
    But the fact that you can put your feelings in a poem like this is just amazing!!! A reall knights quality. lol... sorry... history... sheesh ^^
    I'll be waiting forward to the next one Sprout...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Love Sick (part 2)

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    lol Shippos comment is sooo funny... nice work on cheering up Shippo.

    I like this poem, it's fool of emotions- anger and sadness (more sadness though). I really didn't like this part:

    because I don't like you being so pessimistic... ^^ have hope, would you?
    But the fact that you can put your feelings in a poem like this is just amazing!!! A reall knights quality. lol... sorry... history... sheesh ^^
    I'll be waiting forward to the next one Sprout...
    Thanks. It's always good to hear you like my writing. I'm not really too fond of my negative writings, so I always debate with my self whether or not to post them.


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    Re: Love Sick (part 2)

    hi, I like your poem, if you want to talk, email me bck soon, name's Martin

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