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Reply With Quoteaww its so good yet it is so sad, *sniff sniff* I love it!!!
*steps back into the shadows and falls down the staris*
That's it! I give up!
If you want him, then keep him.
Just please know that this
is hurtin' my feelings.
I was so damn sure
you were gonna return.
But now you say you can't;
I'm tired of being hurt.
I love you so much!
I should've just moved on.
INstead of waiting for the day
I'd keep you in my arms.
Sorry if I sound pissed.
I'm not mad, just hurt.
And I've tried for too long
to not feel like dirt.
It's like the angel in you
sensed the demon in me.
Because before today, I
thought I was your everything.
But I'm not gonna trip,
I won't throw a fit.
I just wished that it was me
you chose, instead of picking him.
So once again, here I am.
Alone--no longer confused.
Still dealing with the loss,
still in pain from the bruise.
I guess I'll never be happy,
I'll never be loved.
No more hope or patience;
Wait for you? Naw, I'm done.
The battle's over, I lost.
I can see that now.
But, can I deal with defeat?
I really don't know how.
Good luck, I'm sure you'll need it.
Take it as far as you can.
Just know I'm done tryingto
regain my status of being your man.
aww its so good yet it is so sad, *sniff sniff* I love it!!!
*steps back into the shadows and falls down the staris*
Shippo is determined to become a lvl higherI'm a solider of Pen and Paper!<3 Atomik_Sprout <3
lol Shippos comment is sooo funny... nice work on cheering up Shippo.
I like this poem, it's fool of emotions- anger and sadness (more sadness though). I really didn't like this part:
because I don't like you being so pessimistic... ^^ have hope, would you?I guess I'll never be happy,
I'll never be loved.
No more hope or patience;
But the fact that you can put your feelings in a poem like this is just amazing!!! A reall knights quality. lol... sorry... history... sheesh ^^
I'll be waiting forward to the next one Sprout...
Thanks. It's always good to hear you like my writing. I'm not really too fond of my negative writings, so I always debate with my self whether or not to post them.Originally Posted by Lasura
hi, I like your poem, if you want to talk, email me bck soon, name's Martin
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