Love is an ugly word

*Shonen* · Jul 03, 2006, 12:08 AM

Is there happiness to be found in love,
the joy depicted in stories, tales, legends.
The warmth that takes away the pain,
sorrow and loneliness.

Or is love just another feeling,
one that clouds the mind,
the ability to reason and see clearly.

What if it is the pain that keeps us sane,
the fear of loss that makes us think, plan, see.
If that pain is swept away with love,
shouldn't love be considered as undesirable...

Reese · Jul 08, 2006, 09:31 AM

Short yet complex. I absolutely enjoyed reading this poem of yours. This poem has made me re-think the entire concept of Love. Good job with this. To conclude I sign off with my favy quote, or rather stanza :

Quote:

What if it is the pain that keeps us sane,
the fear of loss that makes us think, plan, see.
If that pain is swept away with love,
shouldn't love be considered as undesirable...

P.R. Princess · Jul 08, 2006, 09:35 AM

I like it
it makes you think more of what love realy is
keep up the good work

HieisLove · Jul 08, 2006, 09:36 AM

I really like your poem. Please write more

Casben · Jul 08, 2006, 09:39 AM

Nice work, it really made me think about love which is what good poetry should do! Make you think! Well done!

*NightFox* · Jul 08, 2006, 09:48 AM

Same style as allways, something that you would write...

It's true that sometimes when we are in love we can't think
clearly...and pain is what makes us think in that point.
But I don't see love as bad thing.

Really nicely done, nice complex poem.

*Shonen* · Jul 08, 2006, 04:04 PM

Thanks for the comments everyone. Keep 'em coming

Jul 03, 2006, 12:08 AM	#1 (permalink)
Shonen AO Troublemaker Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Like you really care... Posts: 455 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 1,842	Love is an ugly word Is there happiness to be found in love, the joy depicted in stories, tales, legends. The warmth that takes away the pain, sorrow and loneliness. Or is love just another feeling, one that clouds the mind, the ability to reason and see clearly. What if it is the pain that keeps us sane, the fear of loss that makes us think, plan, see. If that pain is swept away with love, shouldn't love be considered as undesirable... __________________ [Sig-Team Member] [My Profile] [My Gallery] *Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of Law*
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P.R. Princess NalaMidnight Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Virginia Posts: 900 Thanks: 3 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 14,160	Re: Love is an ugly word I like it it makes you think more of what love realy is keep up the good work __________________ ~GUNSLINGER~A7X=MIA~ ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~ ~I give my heart and everything to my sailor~
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Casben Newbie Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Here!^_^ Posts: 84 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 547	Re: Love is an ugly word Nice work, it really made me think about love which is what good poetry should do! Make you think! Well done!
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NightFox Mr/Miss Butterfly Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: University of Turku Posts: 500 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,277	Re: Love is an ugly word Same style as allways, something that you would write... It's true that sometimes when we are in love we can't think clearly...and pain is what makes us think in that point. But I don't see love as bad thing. Really nicely done, nice complex poem. __________________ Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
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Shonen AO Troublemaker Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Like you really care... Posts: 455 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 1,842	Re: Love is an ugly word Thanks for the comments everyone. Keep 'em coming __________________ [Sig-Team Member] [My Profile] [My Gallery] *Do what thou wilt shall be the whole of Law*
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