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    Love is an ugly word

    Is there happiness to be found in love,
    the joy depicted in stories, tales, legends.
    The warmth that takes away the pain,
    sorrow and loneliness.

    Or is love just another feeling,
    one that clouds the mind,
    the ability to reason and see clearly.

    What if it is the pain that keeps us sane,
    the fear of loss that makes us think, plan, see.
    If that pain is swept away with love,
    shouldn't love be considered as undesirable...

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    Re: Love is an ugly word

    Short yet complex. I absolutely enjoyed reading this poem of yours. This poem has made me re-think the entire concept of Love. Good job with this. To conclude I sign off with my favy quote, or rather stanza :

    What if it is the pain that keeps us sane,
    the fear of loss that makes us think, plan, see.
    If that pain is swept away with love,
    shouldn't love be considered as undesirable...

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    Re: Love is an ugly word

    I like it
    it makes you think more of what love realy is
    keep up the good work

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    Re: Love is an ugly word

    I really like your poem. Please write more
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    Re: Love is an ugly word

    Nice work, it really made me think about love which is what good poetry should do! Make you think! Well done!

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    Re: Love is an ugly word

    Same style as allways, something that you would write...

    It's true that sometimes when we are in love we can't think
    clearly...and pain is what makes us think in that point.
    But I don't see love as bad thing.

    Really nicely done, nice complex poem.


    Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...

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    Re: Love is an ugly word

    Thanks for the comments everyone. Keep 'em coming

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