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    Love...What is it?

    This wrote to me by my first love...

    Love is the pain
    that we all hate,
    we try to stay away
    but at times its too late,
    you may be in love
    and not even know it,
    so take a look around
    but try not to blow it,
    cause its the best
    feeling in the world,
    like a good climax
    or ten tons of gold,
    but once you have it]
    try not to lose it,
    because some never find it
    and i abused it,
    love is the pain
    that we all hate,
    but its what helps
    decide our fate.


    Whose gift this is you cannot know.
    My heart is in your keeping though.
    You will not mind my writing here
    To tell you that I love you so.
    I know that you must think it queer
    For me to love and not come near
    But linger by some frozen lake
    This most lovest time of year.
    I sometimes give my head a shake
    and ask if there is some mistake.
    It's lonely out here 'mid the sweep
    Of bitter wind and icy flake.
    My love for you is dark and deep,
    but it is a promise I will keep
    As from afar I watch and weep
    ♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥

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    Re: Love...What is it?

    Wow. That sounds like what I do with guys I like.

    I watch from afar and ignore them when they look towards me.

    Even if they get a girlfriend, it doesn't bother me, but when he gets close I tremble... I think I'm afraid of him... But awsome poem! Clever and well written! A+!!

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    Re: Love...What is it?

    Nice, and touching It is very realistic and the person has loved you a lot

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    yup, that was beautiful...keep it up

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    Re: Love...What is it?

    Great poetry! I caught your message right of the bat! ^_^
    Pact with diffrent feelings! I think thats what lights up your poem!

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