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Reply With Quoteagreed with all up there..
Lots of emotion... the detail is good too.. it's a good piece ^^ keep up the good work ok~!will be reading more of urs
.... You have feelings for two people even though your happy with one your wondering what it would be like to be with the other. Something, and your not sure what, is pulling you away from the one your with and yet something stronger is keeping you there.. .They are playing tug-a-war with your heart and you don't know who to turn too.. Your lost and confused in a black hole of feelings... Your wondering how it got this way.. your confused by it.. I'm sure they wonder the same things... How things came to be the way they are... it's rough.. and yet once you figure it out.. it will get better.
You did a good job and I would love for you to write more.
agreed with all up there..
Lots of emotion... the detail is good too.. it's a good piece ^^ keep up the good work ok~!
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nice poem!!very nice indeed!sometimes i feel like you said i the poem!thanks for sharing it with us!!
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ooo still the wonderful poems ^^
its very long tho lol
but its awsome work ty for uploading it so we could read it ^^
Very good Ichigo! I can relate to your poem here. I can feel the emotions that is coming off of the poem when I read it. Keep up the good work.
Thank you every one I am glad you liked it personaly I like this one too, again sorrty for then length but I got everything down. thanks again guys I appreciate all your feedback.
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you've gotten to be quite the writer there mister. Congradulations. I can really seriously relate to this poem. I'm sorry you have to go through that too.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
Thank you bratling and actually this was a spur of the moment type thing. they seem to be the better ones. thanks though for your comment. I appreciate it. I will keep it up and it is alright. (been through worse)
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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