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    Re: love and wonder

    So have I but that doesn't make it plesant. I find that my spur of the moment written in a quick reply poems are the better of my works then the ones I sit at the notebook and try to write something out. They're often more....felt.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: love and wonder

    yeah I here ya. that is what normally happens with me because I write to get things off my mind and these types of poems are what showes up alot of the time.
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    Yeah. I'm not very good about writing without my feelings being in it. I'm not great at putting myself in others shoes either, especially with the positive feelings. Maybe it's cus I'm so depressed. But either way it doesn't work. But the emotional stuff is at least passible. Your poem kinda grabbed me by my emo throat this morning.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Well i hope it gets better for ya Bratling. and you will get better at writing I know you will. just keep with it and I am glad you liked it. If you wanna talk about anything just PM me and I will talk.
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    Re: love and wonder

    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post

    But wait for what no-one knows.*??
    I wasn't sure if that was what that line was meant to say, had to read it out loud. but yeah as said just a few spelling mistakes.

    But really its a great poem Ichigo. One very heart felt poem and as I understand from your situation, very true too. I can really relate to this poem as you know and that is what makes it a great piece or work.

    You really did write this from your emotions and it shows, great work!
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    Re: love and wonder

    Thanks Dancy I am glad you liked it. I will post more soon I promiss and yes I ment to put the "K" in there.
    Last edited by Ichigo_06; Oct 23, 2007 at 09:32 AM.
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    Re: love and wonder

    I think you will do it and Post more of poems like what you say Because that poem you put up Great and ture in many way for me ...
    + Well done dudu...^^

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    Thanks xxoxx I am glad my poem is well liked, I promiss to right more soon, and make it not so sad. thanks for all your imput guys.
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