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    love / worrier


    I put my arms around you saying how much I care and love you...

    I want you to know I will never leave you...



    I know it’s a hard promise to keep but I still wait for you

    If you can wait for three or four years ahead of us when I can be physically
    be with you...

    No one knows the pain I have knowing I have to wait to be with the one you

    love deeply even to wait and have a descent life from everyone else in my

    life to be with you I don’t care



    I would wait a life time for you never to be backed down

    Needing to have you here along side me

    It is a goal I’m willing to endure and complete

    Even if it takes forever




    I love you that much *** I want you here so bad I’m contemplating on
    everything...

    I know I shouldn’t worry but it can not be helped I’m a worrier in fortunately


    For the ones I love and hold so dearly to my bleeding heart...



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    Re: love / worrier

    Nice job Lizzie!

    This poem is awesome,

    it made me feel like this kind of feeling can make

    you do anything really.

    ^^ nice hope you write more poems.


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: love / worrier

    good job lizzie i agree need work on the rhyming but its excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I love the structure and how the words all fit together in one place i would ♥ to hear more form you^-^

    ♥~*The Princess*~♥
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: love / worrier

    thank you for ur comments..... onfoutunitly i cant do rhyming poems.... to aucword lol

    but thank you both for the comments

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