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    Love, You Are

    Love, you are a ruthless force,
    plowing through the sweet meadows of my life,
    leaving my world ugly and tired.

    Love, you are unforgiving and unkind,
    faithless and blind,
    shattering my bliss like gunfire.

    Love, you are cruel and frugal,
    withholding my blessings,
    like a nightmarish preacher for hire.

    Love, you have broken me,
    tamed my rebellious spirit;
    I am the fly, you are the spider.

    Love, you promised me the universe,
    you said you'd be gentl and unconditional,
    but love, you are a liar!
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    Re: Love, You Are

    I guess love can be that way sometimes,but it can also be one of the most wonderful things in the world. Especially when you find the one who gives you as much real love as you give them Good poem I liked it.
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    Re: Love, You Are

    I like it, because that is how it is with me and this guy. At one point he loved me but I didn`t give him a chance and he moved away. Now he is back after about 6 years and doesn`t give me a second thought about being other than a friend.

    God, I hate this because I really do love him.
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    Re: Love, You Are

    Nice use of punctuation! I enjoyed reading this poem. The flow is what caught my eye.
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    Re: Love, You Are

    I'm glad all of you like my poem^_^
    and thank you for your comments.
    glad to see you like it Kasai.

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    Re: Love, You Are

    Wow, u never cease to amaze me with ur works xD
    I love how u described love, such true words. Nice job

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    Re: Love, You Are

    oh la la..
    that's ouch man.. you got me on that poem
    because that's what my heart speaks before..
    my x lied to me so i let her go..
    now, i got a new girl who's loyal and honest and starting to like
    anime too because of me.. hehehe...
    on the other hand, i really like the poem.. make more
    coz i love them!

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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