Thread: In Love With You

How cute. I'm such a romance type!!!!! I love your poem!!! I love it for being so romantic!!!! I hope to see more in the future.

Originally Posted by hellknight

I am in love with you
I know you love me
When we're together
Our spirits are free

Am always here
Holding your hand
Wiping away your tears
Knowing am your man

I know how it is
To be in love with you
We read each other's mind
Our feelings are true.

Short I know, but I need your guy's opinion about this one, ^_^

Spell check a bit. You need some I am's in there. You have a great base, but you need to add depth. Like a painting. Layer it up, deepin each line to your thoughts. Describe everything, even how you "know how it is"

LOL, Thanks you two, especailly you Nympho, I'll keep that in mind of what you said. thank you ^_^