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    loveless pain

    I wish I never put my heart out on the line for you.

    I loved you so much. But you used me.

    Used me to get to my sister.

    It’s a shame though because we would of made a cute couple people say.

    But could that of happened?

    Me and you? Love?

    Loves a complicated thing.

    It can make you do crazy things.

    But using me to get to my sister is the lowest I have seen.

    So go. Get out. Get out of my life.

    You’re not wanted here anymore.

    So leave me with out a trace.

    Take your memories with you.

    I don’t want to have anything to remind me of the pain I’m felling right now.

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    Re: loveless pain

    the word love is just a word, lol i like these poem alot keep it up EQ.

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    Re: loveless pain

    hmm are these things happening to u cuz then i feel reall bad cuz the poem really speaks out and tells me how u feel

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    Re: loveless pain

    >.> This sound very familar(sp) lizzy.

    But I like it =D
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    thats how you center.

    ._.ll that poems depressing lizzie.
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    Re: loveless pain

    That sounds like what my ex husband did to me despite the sister part. That is really low of him to use you her to get to her sister. That's just wrong. I liked it and I hope to read another one soon.
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    Re: loveless pain

    thanks for the comments btw nothing like this has ever happend to me its usealy just wrightin for me not feeling i cant afford to show mine just yet

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    Re: loveless pain

    Awesome job ^_^ Love the story to it too and the forceful words

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    Re: loveless pain

    I like this poem it just screams anger! I agree with Cherryblossom18, that is pretty low to use her to get to her sister! Nice job putting this into words!

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