Loveless(poem based on the anime)

My name is Breathless
I can’t breathe when you are near
My name is Memoryless
I have no memories, only fear
My name is Bondless
There can’t be a bond between you and me
My name is Friendless
I don’t have any friends as you can see
My name is Sleepless
I just stay awake and think of you
My name is Painless
There’s only emptiness and nothing you can do
My name is Tearless
There are no tears left to cry
My name is Trustless
Can’t trust anyone just want to die
My name is Skinless
There’s no outside to show me
My name is Nameless
There’s just nothing I can be
My name is Warless
I don’t want to fight
My name is Endless
I want to be forever by your side

But I will destroy everything we’ve built together
My name is Loveless,
I can never have true love forever.
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based on the anime 'Loveless'. It has like
all the episode's names made into a poem by me~!^^

A nicely made poem... simple and easy to understand... and creative for you made it according to the episode names.. and the rhymes was nice...

good job ^^ keep it up i can see you have improved in this poem...

Hmmm... I won't say that this poem is simple, I find it very complicated... relationships and feelings can never be easy to understand...

I like the structre of it... It's wonderfully thought up... A really GREAT work with that, I know that would have never come across my mind... It is made acording to episode names? O.o nice... it's like working on an order *nods* nice...

The plot is very sad, and quite interesting... and I think many people can connect it to themselves...

Anyways... I hope to see more... I liked this, don't think anything should be changed...