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    Loveless(poem based on the anime)

    My name is Breathless
    I can’t breathe when you are near
    My name is Memoryless
    I have no memories, only fear
    My name is Bondless
    There can’t be a bond between you and me
    My name is Friendless
    I don’t have any friends as you can see
    My name is Sleepless
    I just stay awake and think of you
    My name is Painless
    There’s only emptiness and nothing you can do
    My name is Tearless
    There are no tears left to cry
    My name is Trustless
    Can’t trust anyone just want to die
    My name is Skinless
    There’s no outside to show me
    My name is Nameless
    There’s just nothing I can be
    My name is Warless
    I don’t want to fight
    My name is Endless
    I want to be forever by your side

    But I will destroy everything we’ve built together
    My name is Loveless,
    I can never have true love forever.
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    based on the anime 'Loveless'. It has like
    all the episode's names made into a poem by me~!^^



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    Re: Loveless(poem based on the anime)

    A nicely made poem... simple and easy to understand... and creative for you made it according to the episode names.. and the rhymes was nice...

    good job ^^ keep it up i can see you have improved in this poem...

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    Re: Loveless(poem based on the anime)

    Hmmm... I won't say that this poem is simple, I find it very complicated... relationships and feelings can never be easy to understand...

    I like the structre of it... It's wonderfully thought up... A really GREAT work with that, I know that would have never come across my mind... It is made acording to episode names? O.o nice... it's like working on an order *nods* nice...

    The plot is very sad, and quite interesting... and I think many people can connect it to themselves...

    Anyways... I hope to see more... I liked this, don't think anything should be changed...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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