Lovely

This is a very short poem...I just wrote it today...I don't care for it that much but maybe some of you will ^-^


I'm coughing up butterflies and
whispering sweet nothings in your ear.

The ocean found in my eyes hides
creatures of all sizes and kinds.

The clouds look different today
like mother earth has changed her ways.

Silence stolen, thunder sounds.
I wonder what shall be found.

Rain falling from the lovely heavens
above dampens my mind today.

You're my favorite thing to hear.

Sorry to say but it did not float my boat it was just duumb to me because your like your my favorite thing to hear it was just weird

Well...I am sorry you didn't like it, but it is ten times better than that "slit my wrists, bleed to death in my own pain and misery" crap. I do admit though that I have written better stuff. If you want go check out my other stuff.

Well I liked it! I think it was really great cause it seem so romantic and interesting so I hope to see more! :D:

Aww..thank you...I appreciate it very much ^-^. It is time for me to get into bed so good night! :)

"I'm coughing up butterflies"

For some reason I suddenly thought of Jesus.
Don't ask me why.

Good poem I believe, though it should be longer with a bit more explanation supporting the last line.

Not to get lovey duby and all but it sounds like your in love or something.

Yay...I am like jesus! ^-^

I am in love...that was part of the poem meaning. I have a boyfriend of over a year, thats who it's about.