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Diamond in the Rough | Lovely This is a very short poem...I just wrote it today...I don't care for it that much but maybe some of you will ^-^ I'm coughing up butterflies and whispering sweet nothings in your ear. The ocean found in my eyes hides creatures of all sizes and kinds. The clouds look different today like mother earth has changed her ways. Silence stolen, thunder sounds. I wonder what shall be found. Rain falling from the lovely heavens above dampens my mind today. You're my favorite thing to hear.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 21,401 | Re: Lovely Sorry to say but it did not float my boat it was just duumb to me because your like your my favorite thing to hear it was just weird |
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Diamond in the Rough | Re: Lovely Well...I am sorry you didn't like it, but it is ten times better than that "slit my wrists, bleed to death in my own pain and misery" crap. I do admit though that I have written better stuff. If you want go check out my other stuff.
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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![]() Credits: 13,226 | Re: Lovely Well I liked it! I think it was really great cause it seem so romantic and interesting so I hope to see more! ![]()
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![]() ![]() Credits: 260 | Re: Lovely "I'm coughing up butterflies" For some reason I suddenly thought of Jesus. Don't ask me why. Good poem I believe, though it should be longer with a bit more explanation supporting the last line.
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