Lovely

OfeliasFire · Jun 16, 2007, 04:59 PM

This is a very short poem...I just wrote it today...I don't care for it that much but maybe some of you will ^-^

I'm coughing up butterflies and
whispering sweet nothings in your ear.

The ocean found in my eyes hides
creatures of all sizes and kinds.

The clouds look different today
like mother earth has changed her ways.

Silence stolen, thunder sounds.
I wonder what shall be found.

Rain falling from the lovely heavens
above dampens my mind today.

You're my favorite thing to hear.

!The GunGrave of Trigun · Jun 16, 2007, 06:46 PM

Sorry to say but it did not float my boat it was just duumb to me because your like your my favorite thing to hear it was just weird

OfeliasFire · Jun 16, 2007, 07:39 PM

Well...I am sorry you didn't like it, but it is ten times better than that "slit my wrists, bleed to death in my own pain and misery" crap. I do admit though that I have written better stuff. If you want go check out my other stuff.

KuwiRules145 · Jun 16, 2007, 07:53 PM

Well I liked it! I think it was really great cause it seem so romantic and interesting so I hope to see more!

OfeliasFire · Jun 16, 2007, 07:56 PM

Aww..thank you...I appreciate it very much ^-^. It is time for me to get into bed so good night!

-=Broken^Halo=- · Jun 16, 2007, 10:19 PM

"I'm coughing up butterflies"

For some reason I suddenly thought of Jesus.
Don't ask me why.

Good poem I believe, though it should be longer with a bit more explanation supporting the last line.

Qu99 · Jun 16, 2007, 10:39 PM

Not to get lovey duby and all but it sounds like your in love or something.

OfeliasFire · Jun 17, 2007, 01:06 PM

Yay...I am like jesus! ^-^

I am in love...that was part of the poem meaning. I have a boyfriend of over a year, thats who it's about.

Jun 16, 2007, 04:59 PM	#1 (permalink)
OfeliasFire Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: テネシー州 Posts: 332 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,525	Lovely This is a very short poem...I just wrote it today...I don't care for it that much but maybe some of you will ^-^ I'm coughing up butterflies and whispering sweet nothings in your ear. The ocean found in my eyes hides creatures of all sizes and kinds. The clouds look different today like mother earth has changed her ways. Silence stolen, thunder sounds. I wonder what shall be found. Rain falling from the lovely heavens above dampens my mind today. You're my favorite thing to hear. __________________ Dear Dinah...
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!The GunGrave of Trigun Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Hell Posts: 1,099 Thanks: 4 Thanked 23 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 21,401	Re: Lovely Sorry to say but it did not float my boat it was just duumb to me because your like your my favorite thing to hear it was just weird
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OfeliasFire Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: テネシー州 Posts: 332 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,525	Re: Lovely Well...I am sorry you didn't like it, but it is ten times better than that "slit my wrists, bleed to death in my own pain and misery" crap. I do admit though that I have written better stuff. If you want go check out my other stuff. __________________ Dear Dinah...
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KuwiRules145 Tournaments Won: 2 ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡ Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart Posts: 963 Thanks: 3 Thanked 24 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 13,226	Re: Lovely Well I liked it! I think it was really great cause it seem so romantic and interesting so I hope to see more! __________________ ♡♥♡♥No matter what I'll always love you for Eternity...I love you Kyle♥♡♥♡ Never let me go... hold me tight and love me like I do ♡♥Anime Life♥♡
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OfeliasFire Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: テネシー州 Posts: 332 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,525	Re: Lovely Aww..thank you...I appreciate it very much ^-^. It is time for me to get into bed so good night! __________________ Dear Dinah...
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-=Broken^Halo=- Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Texas,USA Posts: 226 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 260	Re: Lovely "I'm coughing up butterflies" For some reason I suddenly thought of Jesus. Don't ask me why. Good poem I believe, though it should be longer with a bit more explanation supporting the last line. __________________ Fr3aK~0f~N@Tu\|23
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Qu99 Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Re: Lovely Not to get lovey duby and all but it sounds like your in love or something.
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OfeliasFire Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: テネシー州 Posts: 332 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,525	Re: Lovely Yay...I am like jesus! ^-^ I am in love...that was part of the poem meaning. I have a boyfriend of over a year, thats who it's about. __________________ Dear Dinah...
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