Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart

Shinigami's_Angel · Jan 12, 2007, 07:15 PM

Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart...

Oh oh,Where are you?
I'm right here,Just turn around
I'm behind you,I'm not seethrough
I've been here,Just like always...

"I'm here"

I may disappear someday,But I just might reapear
I pray that the day will never come,Cause I don't think that you or I could handle it
I can't live without you,Nor could you stand to go on like that
I would either go insane,Or you'd end up ending it all...

"Can't do it"

You are my world,Like you tell me i'm your's each and everyday
Life would just be meaningless without you there,There would be no hope for you or me
You'd be lost among the streets trying to search for me,And you'd end up with nothing
You'd cry every night in our bed,Calling out my name softly...

"I wouldn't be able to take it"

Sweet kisses,You and I exchange each night
Loveing words,Prayers of love
Tender touches,Soft caress
Calling out each others names,Love makeing through the night...

"This is how it should be,always"

But why did it have to happen,Why something like this?
Why us,I keep asking each and everynight
But I never receive an answer,I wish I knew why
Why us,Why couldn't things stay the way they were?...

"Why?"

I wish that we could turn back time,I'd rather live in the past
There we were happy,Why did it have to all change?
Why did fate have to take everything away,It's all gone now
We were forced to part,So now your all broken inside and so am I !...

"I didn't want this"

I may disappear someday,But I just might reapear...in your dreams
I pray that the day will never come,Cause I don't think that you or I could handle it at all
I can't live without you,Nor could you stand to go on like that all alone
I would either go insane,Or you'd end up ending it all...just to get away from all of the pain!...

"Can't do it,Neither of us could do this"

You are my world,Like you told me i'm your's each and everyday
Life would just be meaningless without you there,There would be no hope for you or me nun at all
You'd be lost among the streets trying to search for me,And you'd end up with nothing at all in the end
You cry everynight in our bed,Calling out my name softly...begging me to return to you...

"I wouldn't be able to take it,Nor would I be able to come to you ever again"

Oh oh,Where are you? You say quitely through the night
I'm right here,Just turn around..I say even though you wont hear me
I'm behind you,I'm not seethrough..But to you and all I now am
I've been here,Just like always...and forever...

"I'm here,even though you may not see or hear me.
I know that your hurting but so am I.
I wish I could do something for you,to ease the pain.
But there's nothing I can do.Just sit and watch over you.
And cry along with you through the long and lonely nights."....

*Ky-lyrra* · Jan 12, 2007, 07:28 PM

Angel thank you for writing this poem even though it was not for me. Right this minute I'm going through it and it touches my heart.

Shinigami's_Angel · Jan 12, 2007, 07:35 PM

Wow,thank you so very much Ky-lyrra!! *hugs*

I'm glad that you liked it so much.

I was a bit worried since I wrote it while I was at work that it wasn't going 2 come out so well,but i'm glad that it did.

CherryBlossom18 · Jan 12, 2007, 07:55 PM

I really liked your song sis. It was just as great as your others. Bravo to you and I can't wait to read your next one.

Shinigami's_Angel · Jan 12, 2007, 08:01 PM

Thank you sooooo much Sis!! *hugs*

I'm glad that you liked my newest song and that you think it's great just like all of my others.

And hopefully i'll have another 1 soon,well I hope lol.

BlueFox1 · Jan 12, 2007, 10:23 PM

Angel you have done it again! You always seem to dazzle me with an amazing song and this one I could honestly relate with!

You do an outstanding job writing your poems and you wonder why I'm your #1 fan huh?

*Hugs Angel* Keep up the incredible work Angel!

Shinigami's_Angel · Jan 12, 2007, 10:27 PM

Thank you soooooooooooo very much Fox!!! *hugs*

I'm happy that you liked my new song.I wrote this while I was at work if you can believe it lol.I worked really hard on it and i'm glad about the way that it did come out.

BlueFox1 · Jan 12, 2007, 10:33 PM

Your welcom Angel! I can't believe that you actually managed to write a song at work!

But then again Angel you are amazing!

And of course I absolutely love it, truly a great song!

Shinigami's_Angel · Jan 12, 2007, 10:40 PM

Thank you.

But I guess it helped that I had a few hours of free time,since it was slow at work yesterday and all lol.Thanks again Fox. *hugs*

JefferyXie · Jan 12, 2007, 10:50 PM

Aww..just like the usual standard quality in comparison to the other ones you wrote.I just wonder what inspires you to write like this.Yes,the theme is virtually the same each time,but hey,that is impressive that each song is just as good and if not better than the one before it.Keep it up,Angel!5 Stars.

Shinigami's_Angel · Jan 12, 2007, 10:57 PM

Thank you sooo very much JefferyXie!! *hugs*

I'm glad that you think so.

Well sometimes it's what i'm feeling,if I read something or if it's a song that i'm listening 2 lol.

I guess i'm just in a love song mood nowadays lol.Thanks again.

Jan 12, 2007, 07:15 PM	#1 (permalink)
Shinigami's_Angel In Love With A Vampire Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: All alone in the cold Moonlight..Forever till Twilight. Posts: 686 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,022	Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart *Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart...* Oh oh,Where are you? I'm right here,Just turn around I'm behind you,I'm not seethrough I've been here,Just like always... "I'm here" I may disappear someday,But I just might reapear I pray that the day will never come,Cause I don't think that you or I could handle it I can't live without you,Nor could you stand to go on like that I would either go insane,Or you'd end up ending it all... "Can't do it" You are my world,Like you tell me i'm your's each and everyday Life would just be meaningless without you there,There would be no hope for you or me You'd be lost among the streets trying to search for me,And you'd end up with nothing You'd cry every night in our bed,Calling out my name softly... "I wouldn't be able to take it" Sweet kisses,You and I exchange each night Loveing words,Prayers of love Tender touches,Soft caress Calling out each others names,Love makeing through the night... "This is how it should be,always" But why did it have to happen,Why something like this? Why us,I keep asking each and everynight But I never receive an answer,I wish I knew why Why us,Why couldn't things stay the way they were?... "Why?" I wish that we could turn back time,I'd rather live in the past There we were happy,Why did it have to all change? Why did fate have to take everything away,It's all gone now We were forced to part,So now your all broken inside and so am I !... "I didn't want this" I may disappear someday,But I just might reapear...in your dreams I pray that the day will never come,Cause I don't think that you or I could handle it at all I can't live without you,Nor could you stand to go on like that all alone I would either go insane,Or you'd end up ending it all...just to get away from all of the pain!... "Can't do it,Neither of us could do this" You are my world,Like you told me i'm your's each and everyday Life would just be meaningless without you there,There would be no hope for you or me nun at all You'd be lost among the streets trying to search for me,And you'd end up with nothing at all in the end You cry everynight in our bed,Calling out my name softly...begging me to return to you... "I wouldn't be able to take it,Nor would I be able to come to you ever again" Oh oh,Where are you? You say quitely through the night I'm right here,Just turn around..I say even though you wont hear me I'm behind you,I'm not seethrough..But to you and all I now am I've been here,Just like always...and forever... "I'm here,even though you may not see or hear me. I know that your hurting but so am I. I wish I could do something for you,to ease the pain. But there's nothing I can do.Just sit and watch over you. And cry along with you through the long and lonely nights.".... __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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Ky-lyrra Lost In My Own World Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Fruityville, Florida Posts: 1,531 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 4,989	Re: Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart Angel thank you for writing this poem even though it was not for me. Right this minute I'm going through it and it touches my heart. __________________ ™Soon To Be Mother™ Thanks For The Tag Aiora!
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,066	Re: Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart I really liked your song sis. It was just as great as your others. Bravo to you and I can't wait to read your next one. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,136	Re: Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart Angel you have done it again! You always seem to dazzle me with an amazing song and this one I could honestly relate with! You do an outstanding job writing your poems and you wonder why I'm your #1 fan huh? Hugs Angel Keep up the incredible work Angel! __________________
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Shinigami's_Angel In Love With A Vampire Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: All alone in the cold Moonlight..Forever till Twilight. Posts: 686 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,022	Re: Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart Thank you soooooooooooo very much Fox!!! hugs I'm happy that you liked my new song.I wrote this while I was at work if you can believe it lol.I worked really hard on it and i'm glad about the way that it did come out. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,136	Re: Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart Your welcom Angel! I can't believe that you actually managed to write a song at work! But then again Angel you are amazing! And of course I absolutely love it, truly a great song! __________________
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JefferyXie Shichibukai Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Sydney Posts: 613 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Re: Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart Aww..just like the usual standard quality in comparison to the other ones you wrote.I just wonder what inspires you to write like this.Yes,the theme is virtually the same each time,but hey,that is impressive that each song is just as good and if not better than the one before it.Keep it up,Angel!5 Stars.
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Shinigami's_Angel In Love With A Vampire Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: All alone in the cold Moonlight..Forever till Twilight. Posts: 686 Thanks: 40 Thanked 7 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,022	Re: Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart Thank you sooo very much JefferyXie!! hugs I'm glad that you think so. Well sometimes it's what i'm feeling,if I read something or if it's a song that i'm listening 2 lol. I guess i'm just in a love song mood nowadays lol.Thanks again. __________________ Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
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