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    Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart

    Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart...


    Oh oh,Where are you?
    I'm right here,Just turn around
    I'm behind you,I'm not seethrough
    I've been here,Just like always...

    "I'm here"

    I may disappear someday,But I just might reapear
    I pray that the day will never come,Cause I don't think that you or I could handle it
    I can't live without you,Nor could you stand to go on like that
    I would either go insane,Or you'd end up ending it all...

    "Can't do it"

    You are my world,Like you tell me i'm your's each and everyday
    Life would just be meaningless without you there,There would be no hope for you or me
    You'd be lost among the streets trying to search for me,And you'd end up with nothing
    You'd cry every night in our bed,Calling out my name softly...

    "I wouldn't be able to take it"

    Sweet kisses,You and I exchange each night
    Loveing words,Prayers of love
    Tender touches,Soft caress
    Calling out each others names,Love makeing through the night...

    "This is how it should be,always"

    But why did it have to happen,Why something like this?
    Why us,I keep asking each and everynight
    But I never receive an answer,I wish I knew why
    Why us,Why couldn't things stay the way they were?...

    "Why?"

    I wish that we could turn back time,I'd rather live in the past
    There we were happy,Why did it have to all change?
    Why did fate have to take everything away,It's all gone now
    We were forced to part,So now your all broken inside and so am I !...

    "I didn't want this"

    I may disappear someday,But I just might reapear...in your dreams
    I pray that the day will never come,Cause I don't think that you or I could handle it at all
    I can't live without you,Nor could you stand to go on like that all alone
    I would either go insane,Or you'd end up ending it all...just to get away from all of the pain!...

    "Can't do it,Neither of us could do this"

    You are my world,Like you told me i'm your's each and everyday
    Life would just be meaningless without you there,There would be no hope for you or me nun at all
    You'd be lost among the streets trying to search for me,And you'd end up with nothing at all in the end
    You cry everynight in our bed,Calling out my name softly...begging me to return to you...

    "I wouldn't be able to take it,Nor would I be able to come to you ever again"

    Oh oh,Where are you? You say quitely through the night
    I'm right here,Just turn around..I say even though you wont hear me
    I'm behind you,I'm not seethrough..But to you and all I now am
    I've been here,Just like always...and forever...

    "I'm here,even though you may not see or hear me.
    I know that your hurting but so am I.
    I wish I could do something for you,to ease the pain.
    But there's nothing I can do.Just sit and watch over you.
    And cry along with you through the long and lonely nights."....
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart

    Angel thank you for writing this poem even though it was not for me. Right this minute I'm going through it and it touches my heart.
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    Wow,thank you so very much Ky-lyrra!! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked it so much. I was a bit worried since I wrote it while I was at work that it wasn't going 2 come out so well,but i'm glad that it did.
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    Re: Lover's Heart's,Torn Apart

    I really liked your song sis. It was just as great as your others. Bravo to you and I can't wait to read your next one.
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    Thanks so much I love it!

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    Thank you sooooo much Sis!! *hugs* I'm glad that you liked my newest song and that you think it's great just like all of my others. And hopefully i'll have another 1 soon,well I hope lol.
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    Angel you have done it again! You always seem to dazzle me with an amazing song and this one I could honestly relate with! You do an outstanding job writing your poems and you wonder why I'm your #1 fan huh? *Hugs Angel* Keep up the incredible work Angel!

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    Thank you soooooooooooo very much Fox!!! *hugs* I'm happy that you liked my new song.I wrote this while I was at work if you can believe it lol.I worked really hard on it and i'm glad about the way that it did come out.
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    Your welcom Angel! I can't believe that you actually managed to write a song at work! But then again Angel you are amazing! And of course I absolutely love it, truly a great song!

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