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    Lover's Lonely Dreams...

    Lover's Lonely Dreams...


    As I walk down the street, I can't help but to think of you
    You fill my mind all of the time, Your even in my dreams
    Holding me tight, And whispering how much you love me
    It's to good to be true, But as good as it seems..it's only a dream...

    "Only a dream"

    I'm sitting at home all alone, Always checking my phone
    As I look at the screen praying it to ring, But all I see is nothing
    It's just wishful thinking, This is how it's meant to be
    You could never love me, I know this but I can't help crying...

    "Can't stop the burning tears"

    Sitting at the park all alone, Watching all the other lovers go by
    I can't help but to think of you, As I cry silently to no one
    My heart can't take much more of this pain, Maybe I should just forget and try to live on
    But that's impossible, Cause you are the light in my world of darkness...

    "My light in the world of darkness"

    I don't want to let go of you, Though you aren't mine to keep
    My eye's well up with tears at that thought, But what can I say..I need you
    Your all I think about at night, I can't even sleep and when I do I dream of only you
    You are the angel that could save me from damnation, But I guess i'm already condemed to eternal pain...

    "Meant to live in pain and heartache forever more"

    My only wish is to be held by you, To feel your warm embrace
    To hold your hand in mine, And be healed by that loving warmth
    To be kissed by you, As the warmth begin's to melt the ice surrounding my heart
    For you tell me that you love me with all of you heart, That would be my forever lasting dream...

    "That is my one and only dream"

    I smile when you go by with another, But I can't help but to cry on the inside
    When we're all alone, I can't help but to feel those so called butterfly's
    But someone always comes and steals you away, And i'm left all alone once again
    It just can't be helped, I've realised this but it still hurt's so much...

    "It hurt's just to much"

    As I walk down the street, I can't help but to think of you and only you
    You fill my mind all of the time, Your even in my dreams ever singel last one
    Holding me tight, And whispering how much you love me and want to be with me
    It's to good to be true, But as good as it seems..it's only a dream...A dream that I wish were reality...

    "Only a dream but I wish it were more"

    I'm sitting at home all alone, Always checking my phone hopeing that you will call me
    As I look at the screen praying it to ring, But all I see is nothing..nothing at all
    It's just wishful thinking, This is how it's meant to be even though I wish it were differently
    You could never love me, I know this but I can't help crying at night and wishing for you...

    "Can't stop the burning tears that fall from my eye's everynight"

    I guess my wish will never be heard, So i'll be left all alone like always
    I'm so cold without your warmth, I can't stand it anymore
    I hate this feeling that is inside of me, I truly hate it
    Because of this feeling I can't live my life, Cause without you..what do I have?...

    "Without you I have nothing..but this broken and cold heart of mine..."

    My only wish is to be held by you, To feel your warm embrace
    To hold your hand in mine, And be healed by that loving warmth
    To be kissed by you, As the warmth begin's to melt the ice surrounding my heart
    For you tell me that you love me with all of you heart, That would be my forever lasting dream...

    "That is my one and only dream...but it's all just a dream.
    I will never be loved by you, so why do I keep trying?
    I love you more than anything.I never knew this feeling till I met you.
    But this is all I a dream.....A dream that I wish would last forever..."
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    Re: Lover's Lonely Dreams...

    Awesome Song Angel! Yeah!!! :Smile: I love this one how you describe everything and remind yourself that is only a dream is awesome! I can't wait to see your next song! I'm proud of you!

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    Re: Lover's Lonely Dreams...

    Thank you sooooooooooooooo much Fox!! *pounces Fox* I'm so glad that you liked it. Yeah I was going for a dream that could never be reached theme.A love that you can never have but you dream of haveing it even just for a little while.I'm really glad with how it turned out,it suprised me lol.Thanks again Fox,your comment's always mean the world 2 me.
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    Re: Lover's Lonely Dreams...

    ohhhhhhhhh ...a nice song oh i love it ...it's very niccccccccccccccccce ....keep up .....wonderful ....

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    Thank you sooo much for the sweet comment xxoxx!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it so much. And i'll be sure 2 keep up my work.
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    Re: Lover's Lonely Dreams...

    Wow sis that is such a sweet and romantic song. It was great how you invisioned all those wonderful things in your dreams. Fantastic job sis and just like Fox I'm proud of you too.
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    Thank you sooooooooooooooooo very much Sis!! *hugs* I'm glad that you like it. And i'm glad that you and Fox are both proud of me,I couldn't be happier.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Lover's Lonely Dreams...

    This is a wonderful poem, I really liked it, It tells everything about my feelings! I really enjoyed reading this!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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