A lovers need

iNonLemon · Oct 20, 2009, 05:45 AM

Holding your hand everywhere
kissing like no one is looking,
I long to feel the touch of your lips against mine.

Oh how I miss that feeling of floating when I'm with you
you mean the world to me baby,
don't ever leave me.

Shippo101 · Oct 20, 2009, 06:30 AM

Such a cute peom. Not too typical. Its really awesome.

One word of advice. Kill the bright red color. (reading this 3 in the morning is blinding me.)

^_________^

iNonLemon · Oct 20, 2009, 06:37 AM

Thanks a lot Shippo, I just typed that off the top of my head since normally I suck at poetry

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iNonLemon Newbie Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Willow Spring, NC Posts: 35 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	A lovers need Holding your hand everywhere kissing like no one is looking, I long to feel the touch of your lips against mine. Oh how I miss that feeling of floating when I'm with you you mean the world to me baby, don't ever leave me. __________________ XBL GT: TFT NonLemon Yes, I have brought Lemon back!! Last edited by iNonLemon; Oct 20, 2009 at 06:37 AM. Reason: color for shippo
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Oct 20, 2009, 06:30 AM	#2 (permalink)
Shippo101 Otaku Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In my own imagination Posts: 268 Thanks: 32 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts	Re: A lovers need Such a cute peom. Not too typical. Its really awesome. One word of advice. Kill the bright red color. (reading this 3 in the morning is blinding me.) ^_________^ __________________ Big Thanks To Sazzy-chan! (best Siggy ever!)
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iNonLemon Newbie Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Willow Spring, NC Posts: 35 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: A lovers need Thanks a lot Shippo, I just typed that off the top of my head since normally I suck at poetry __________________ XBL GT: TFT NonLemon Yes, I have brought Lemon back!!
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