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    A Lover's Story

    A Lover’s Story

    She has problems giving others her heart
    She had never experienced love before
    Never felt the sweet, gentle touch of a lover
    Nor had she ever felt that special way before

    She’s been through a lot in her young years
    Seen and experienced things most don’t want to think about
    But yet she’s been deprived of the necessities
    Of the love and tender care that every child needs

    She was on the verge of a suicidal death
    Dead inside because no one was there
    And the ones who were no longer cared
    She was just an object for everyone to use

    She left a random hello in a guy’s life
    He returned it by saying hi and asking how she was
    She put up a fake smile and said just fine
    However inside she knew she was becoming alive

    It’s been six or seven months and the struggles they’ve gone through
    Become nothing more than a distant memory
    But she wouldn’t give him her heart, not completely
    Because deep down inside that part of her was still sleeping

    She awoke one night when the snow was falling outside
    And she had just found out that she would be moving
    Crying, she waited for him to arrive
    And when he finally did, she gave him everything inside

    All the love and passion she had always kept bottled up
    The tears and fears just vanished when he was by her side
    She thought that there was nothing they were hiding
    However she found out different one night

    She talked to a girl who was dating him for a year
    They were together the whole entire time he was with her
    And he still had asked for her to marry him
    He had a lot of nerve

    There was so much that she thought about
    And somehow it didn’t add up
    To the pain, hurt and betrayal she now felt
    And slowly, once again, she died inside

    Yet she thought about it and realized
    That the love she has for him will never die
    It will never dwindle for he brought her to life
    And the love they shared was like burning flames inside

    She loves him and always will
    No matter what they go through
    They will always be there, by each others side
    For it’s their love that’s pure both deep down and inside
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: A Lover's Story

    I thought it was a bit long. And the begining kinda reminded me of an after school special on teenage depression.

    On the other hand, I appreciate the story. It was a bit sad. Like this girl is going to end up giving her love to someone who is undeserving... And its the first time shes ever loved. But then again, I think thats what most of us end up doing.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: A Lover's Story

    Yeah.. i didn't realize how long it really was until i posted it. ^^

    I agree with you.. i think that we love for the fist time when we find that someone who we spend the rest of our lives together.
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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