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    Love's Denial

    Love,
    Denied me since birth,
    Elusive as a dove,
    I hear their cruel mirth.

    They laugh for what they have that I don't,
    Their cruelty almost makes me cry,
    Vowing that I won't,
    Tears quickly recede and dry.

    Hate replaces the sadness,
    Their laughter, deafening in my ears,
    Driving me to madness,
    Fighting the tears.

    Hatred forever dries the tears,
    Madness cures the sadness,
    Their laughter falls on deaf ears,
    The antidote for loneliness.

    Love flows within,
    Hate flows without,

    I have become a self-loving carnage.
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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    wow that is great but I think your last 1 was way better than this 1

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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    Thanks. I like the other one better too.
    I don't have many that are better than
    that. It's one of my best. ^^
    This one is where I got my username
    from. Lol
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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    Re: Love's Denial

    ohhh

    which do you think is your second favorite poem?

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
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    Ah!! get of dat mode, lol. jks, I'm almost invisible all the time. ^_^

    Bck on topic:
    Love and aggression - A common combination yet most ppl refuse to convey it. Thanks for sharing this with us today.
    I love the way u set out the poem. I can actually sense the frustration, anger and intensity. Especially the last stanza..... Alot of anger, very nice.

    Finally.... a dark poem worth reading. Its all lovey dovey here on AO. Blah!! LOL.

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    Re: Love's Denial

    Thank you Reese. It seems that there are some
    out there who can not only appreciate my work,
    but can draw forth the meanings that are the
    framework for the poem itself. I think I could
    really get to like you (wow......that's not
    something I say often. lol)

    My second favorite poem? This one. Not
    enough would have to be my third....
    If that's what you meant sora.
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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    beautiful.... I love it.... keep it up!

    They say you can't use oversized signatures here on AO.

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    Re: Love's Denial

    Thanks for your comment. I appreciate it.
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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