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    Love's Reminder

    Here's a new song that I wrote.I haven't wrote anything in awhile cause i've been sick so I hope it came out okay lol.Oh and sorry that it's a bit long but please read and comment.Thank you *bows*



    Love's Reminder...


    You remeber my Face
    You remeber my Eyes
    You remeber my Smile
    But most of all you remeber our Love...

    "Our Love"

    You call out to me,But I hear nothing
    Your crys and your screams,Seem to never reach me
    You chase after me,But I just keep wondering
    All alone,This seems to be what was meant to be...

    "We are all alone"

    You cry yourself to sleep at night,As you think of me
    Your dreams are filled with horror,As you dream of loseing me
    As you call out my name,I begin to fade away
    You fall to your knees and start to cry,You whisper my name like this is goodbye...

    "This just might be the finale goodbye"

    You scream out that you love me,But you never get a response
    The light's begin to dim,Your all alone
    You take a look around,Still searching for me
    You don't see me,The only thing's that are left are the moon and stars...

    "Night skys and Ocean's of stars"

    I'm all alone to,Lost in a world with no light
    You were my light,So without you I fall into darkness
    I lie in the darkness and I feel like I can't get back up
    You come to mind and I see your crying face,I can't stay locked up here anymore!...

    "I can't stand to see you cry,no more"

    I remeber your Face,Just like an Angel's
    I remeber your Eyes,The same as the Ocean's
    I remeber your Smile,Bright as the Sun
    But most of all I remeber our Love,Just as our Soul's and Heart's are joined as one...

    "Our Love,Our Burning Love"

    I call out to you,But you hear nothing
    My crys and my screams,Seem to never reach you
    I chase after you,But you just keep wondering
    All alone,This seems to be what was meant to be...

    "We are all alone"

    I cry myself to sleep at night,As I think of you
    My dreams are filled with horror,As I dream of loseing you
    As I call out your name,You begin to fade away
    I fall to my knees and start to cry,I whisper your name like this is goodbye...

    "This just might be the finale goodbye"

    We are alone under the moon and stars,We are no longer all alone
    We join our hands and whisper, "There will never be no goodbye's between us"
    We cry together,As we say "I Love You" to one another
    The darkness fade's away,As the Sun begin's to rise over the ocean's stary night skys...

    "This is are reminder,This is our Love Reminder"....
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Love's Reminder

    Yay!!! My Shini wrote another song!!!! I love this one! I understand it all the feelings and the emotions! I haven't talked to you in a while and I hope that you're feeling better as well! Can't wait to read more of your songs and I'm serious if you want me too I'll sing one of your songs! Great Job Angel!

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    @ Foreverinyourarms-Thank you sooo much *hugs* I'm glad that you liked it. Well I was kinda for was that the 2 lovers weren't alone but alone with one another though lol Sorry for the confusion lol.

    @ BlueFox1-Thank you soooooooooooooooooo much Fox *hugs* I'm soooo happy that you liked it. Okay,i'd love it if you'd sing 1 of my songs.
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    Re: Love's Reminder

    awesome song and how when 2 people say i love you and they never hear it
    is really sad but how you made them finaly hear it and see it and feel was great ,i cant wait to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Love's Reminder

    i enjoyed the song the feeling i was able to image great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    poohs my boo

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    @ HolderOfTheDarkChalice-Thank you sooooooooooooo very much big bro *hugs* I'm so glad that you liked it.

    @ babepooh15-Thank you soooo much *hugs* It makes me very happy 2 know that you enjoyed my song.

    @ Foreverinyourarms-Yeah that probably would have made more since huh lol I guess I was just 2 out of it when I wrote it,since i've been sick and all lol
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    Oh, wow!!!!! I really liked it!!!! Hahaha...remind me not get on your bad side...I don't think my sanity would last if the things mentioned in your song were to happen to me!!! Good job!!!!!

    DEMON SPAWN IS AWESOME!!!!! XP

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    Thank you soooooooo very much Wolf *hugs* I'm very happy that you liked it. Don't worry lol.Your my friend and my friends never get on my bad side lol.
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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