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    A Loving Moment

    I'm kissing your lips tenderly,
    as we are embraced in the calm light.
    We're leaned up against my car,
    as i lovingly hold your soft body to mine.

    I end the kiss reluctantly,
    but only to look you in the eyes.
    no more beautiful could God make them,
    than the way he did with yours.

    i see the stars in your eyes,
    and hear my heartbeating softly.
    i know that you're in my heart,
    and in my arms, and in my soul.

    i lean in softly and kiss your lips again,
    so that i can love you even more now.
    i squeeze the pillow tightly,
    and shed another broken hearted tear.


    Justin (White Rose)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: A Loving Moment

    Quote Originally Posted by Shade/K' Heart View Post
    I'm kissing your lips tenderly,
    as we are embraced in the calm light.
    We're leaned up against my car,
    as i lovingly hold your soft body to mine.

    I end the kiss reluctantly,
    but only to look you in the eyes.
    no more beautiful could God make them,
    than the way he did with yours.

    i see the stars in your eyes,
    and hear my heartbeating softly.
    i know that you're in my heart,
    and in my arms, and in my soul.

    i lean in softly and kiss your lips again,
    so that i can love you even more now.
    i squeeze the pillow tightly,
    and shed another broken hearted tear.


    Justin (White Rose)
    sweet poem Justin^^
    and the title goes with it....
    keep up the good work and hope to see more from you

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    Re: A Loving Moment

    your poem was beautifully written. keep up the excellent work ^^
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    Re: A Loving Moment

    Wow, I love it. I can actually visualize it. Good work and keep it up. ^^

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    Re: A Loving Moment

    Ahh I love the poem but it leaves a sort of open idea of what has happened. Is it a boy who's fantasy has escaped from his dream glimpsing at his reality. Or a person who once had, then lost, and wants again?
    I guess in the end it truly doesn't matter unless you're OCD... hmm I should prolly see a doctor for that huh. Seriously though once again this was well written and well thought out. I'm beginning to see a trend here at AO.

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    Re: A Loving Moment

    whoa... beautifully written... i love the second stanza... ^^ very nice indeed... the description is nicely written as well this is a 5 star poem here ^^

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