I'm kissing your lips tenderly,
as we are embraced in the calm light.
We're leaned up against my car,
as i lovingly hold your soft body to mine.
I end the kiss reluctantly,
but only to look you in the eyes.
no more beautiful could God make them,
than the way he did with yours.
i see the stars in your eyes,
and hear my heartbeating softly.
i know that you're in my heart,
and in my arms, and in my soul.
i lean in softly and kiss your lips again,
so that i can love you even more now.
i squeeze the pillow tightly,
and shed another broken hearted tear.
Justin (White Rose)
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
"If you need something to worship, then worship life - all life, every last crawling bit of it! We're all in this beauty together!" - Frank Herbert
your poem was beautifully written. keep up the excellent work ^^
I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
Wow, I love it. I can actually visualize it. Good work and keep it up. ^^
Ahh I love the poem but it leaves a sort of open idea of what has happened. Is it a boy who's fantasy has escaped from his dream glimpsing at his reality. Or a person who once had, then lost, and wants again?
I guess in the end it truly doesn't matter unless you're OCD... hmm I should prolly see a doctor for that huh. Seriously though once again this was well written and well thought out. I'm beginning to see a trend here at AO.
... and join my rebellion against time.
whoa... beautifully written... i love the second stanza... ^^ very nice indeed... the description is nicely written as well this is a 5 star poem here ^^
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