Thread: A Loving Moment

Originally Posted by Shade/K' Heart

I'm kissing your lips tenderly,
as we are embraced in the calm light.
We're leaned up against my car,
as i lovingly hold your soft body to mine.

I end the kiss reluctantly,
but only to look you in the eyes.
no more beautiful could God make them,
than the way he did with yours.

i see the stars in your eyes,
and hear my heartbeating softly.
i know that you're in my heart,
and in my arms, and in my soul.

i lean in softly and kiss your lips again,
so that i can love you even more now.
i squeeze the pillow tightly,
and shed another broken hearted tear.


Justin (White Rose)

sweet poem Justin^^
and the title goes with it....
keep up the good work and hope to see more from you

your poem was beautifully written. keep up the excellent work ^^

Wow, I love it. I can actually visualize it. Good work and keep it up. ^^

Ahh I love the poem but it leaves a sort of open idea of what has happened. Is it a boy who's fantasy has escaped from his dream glimpsing at his reality. Or a person who once had, then lost, and wants again?
I guess in the end it truly doesn't matter unless you're OCD... hmm I should prolly see a doctor for that huh. Seriously though once again this was well written and well thought out. I'm beginning to see a trend here at AO.

whoa... beautifully written... i love the second stanza... ^^ very nice indeed... the description is nicely written as well this is a 5 star poem here ^^