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    Lowering the tone

    My little boy Billy
    had a ten foot willy
    and he sold it to the woman next door.

    She thought it was a snake
    so she hit it with a rake
    and now its only 3 foot four

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    Re: Lowering the tone

    It's abit short,anyhow,I think you tried too hard with the rhyming.
    But the first part somewhat made me giggle.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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    Re: Lowering the tone

    LOL well it's my first poem...i've gotta have credit for that lol

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    Re: Lowering the tone

    well it is funny thats for sure but go easy on the ryming ok and try to add a bit more length to it next time



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    Re: Lowering the tone

    ok i shall add length and less ryming.....thanks for reading any way...lol

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