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    Lucifer's daughter

    I'm lusifers daughter,
    Satans spawn.
    A devil cross breed,
    A killer till dawn.
    In human form,
    I walk in the day.
    With you children,
    I like to play,
    Singing a carol,
    "Till death do us all."
    Commanding your children,
    "Backs to the wall."
    We giggle and laugh,
    In our play.
    When dust do us part,
    I see to it home they stay.
    When the devil sucomes,
    My human will.
    I see to it,
    It's you I kill.

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    Re: Lucifer's daughter

    Quote Originally Posted by nightmaregirl View Post
    I'm lusifers daughter,
    Satans spawn.
    A devil cross breed,
    A killer till dawn.
    In human form,
    I walk in the day.
    With you children,
    I like to play,
    Singing a carol,
    "Till death do us all."
    Commanding your children,
    "Backs to the wall."
    We giggle and laugh,
    In our play.
    When dust do us part,
    I see to it home they stay.
    When the devil sucomes,
    My human will.
    I see to it,
    It's you I kill.
    I dunno.. that was a little weird for me. It started out ok, then.. when you started talking about children... it almost sounded twisted (like pedophile twisted).. but maybe thats just me.

    And when you said "When DUST do us part" did you mean DUSK?

    The rhyming was good though, and so was the overall concept of being evil at night, and normal in the day.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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