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Reply With QuoteI liked this poem. It was good because it told the story of possibly years like it could have happened in moments. I liked it. Good job!
You're an angel fallen from the sky
Sent down from above
To assist a girl crying for relife
She wants to awake from a nightmare
That just won't end
You're Flawless wings will wrap around her
You're warmth will keep her safe
The shadows will fade away
Her smile will reapear
Her Darkest times
You'll be the light
If she falls
You'll help her stand
Everytime she needs to cry
She will run to your arms
Wipe her tears away
Assure her she'll be safe
You won't give her another chance
But you'll help her find a way
Hold the precious hand of an angel
She won't be afraid of her fears no more
Her body will sway in the way of you
She'll reposess the charm she owned
She'll smile with her eyes
Speak with her lips
Spread your wings and fly away
She's okay
I liked this poem. It was good because it told the story of possibly years like it could have happened in moments. I liked it. Good job!
A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
This poem captures what the writer wants to say, the imagery is great because allows you to see the angel wrap his or her wings around the person whose crying! Very good poem hope to see more of your work in the future!
BlueFox1
Are you maybe trying to talk about someone you know? Good poem. It had a good feeling to it.
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