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    Lucky Girl

    You're an angel fallen from the sky
    Sent down from above
    To assist a girl crying for relife
    She wants to awake from a nightmare
    That just won't end
    You're Flawless wings will wrap around her
    You're warmth will keep her safe
    The shadows will fade away
    Her smile will reapear
    Her Darkest times
    You'll be the light
    If she falls
    You'll help her stand
    Everytime she needs to cry
    She will run to your arms
    Wipe her tears away
    Assure her she'll be safe
    You won't give her another chance
    But you'll help her find a way
    Hold the precious hand of an angel
    She won't be afraid of her fears no more
    Her body will sway in the way of you
    She'll reposess the charm she owned
    She'll smile with her eyes
    Speak with her lips
    Spread your wings and fly away
    She's okay

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    Re: Lucky Girl

    I liked this poem. It was good because it told the story of possibly years like it could have happened in moments. I liked it. Good job!
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    Re: Lucky Girl

    This poem captures what the writer wants to say, the imagery is great because allows you to see the angel wrap his or her wings around the person whose crying! Very good poem hope to see more of your work in the future!

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    Re: Lucky Girl

    Are you maybe trying to talk about someone you know? Good poem. It had a good feeling to it.

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