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    Lullabye

    <O: sorry this is quite a long one, please comment>

    Lullabye


    Black lipstick upon his cheek
    Red Blood, seeping from cut's so deep.
    Hangover from night before
    The gun is lying by the door.

    In the stars, he seeks the truth.
    But darkness is the only route.
    I wonder why it has to be'
    Pain is the only thing we receive.

    Sing of life and sing of death.
    Sing of pain and sing of regret.
    Why isn't we can never sing.
    Of love, and good things happening?

    Hope is dyeing in us all
    To safe us once is to watch us fall
    And to see are heartbreak as Oftenly viewed
    Is to see the sun in the sky at noon.

    I see the frequent break in the hearts.
    The diamonds aren't showing up as much.
    And everyone is loosing fate
    No one cares what they end up like.

    Sing of life and sing of death.
    Sing of pain and sing of regret.
    Why isn't we can never sing.
    Of love, and good things happening?

    Soon the world, is gonna turn
    I hope that you're the ones who will burn.
    Just cuz we show individuality.
    Doesn't mean were all cr@zy...


    I figured it all out...
    The reason we can't live life out.
    Is because you're holding us down
    You think your better cuz your clothes!
    But in the end you're all but a Pose

    Sing of life and sing of death.
    Sing of pain and sing of regret.
    Why isn't we can never sing.
    Of love, and good things happening?



    Here we go and sing are song...
    Love is lost, but not forever gone.
    Kiss the silence forever goodbye
    Sing together, are lullaby.

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    Re: Lullabye

    Hope is dyeing in us all
    To safe us once is to watch us fall
    And to see are heartbreak as Oftenly viewed
    Is to see the sun in the sky at noon

    this part really got my attention with
    how you expressed your feeling i have
    felt this before and it was painfull for me
    if i got what you meant from it. very awesome poem
    your doing good it great to ee the poems your posting
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Lullabye

    *gives surpised look* wow am surprised by an artist really good keep it up
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    Re: Lullabye

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    Hope is dyeing in us all
    To safe us once is to watch us fall
    And to see are heartbreak as Oftenly viewed
    Is to see the sun in the sky at noon

    this part really got my attention with
    how you expressed your feeling i have
    felt this before and it was painfull for me
    if i got what you meant from it. very awesome poem
    your doing good it great to ee the poems your posting
    lol, thanks again Dark*rubs my neck in embarrasment**sweatdrop and slight embarrased blush* i dont know what to say to you anymore lol, u understand my poems almost perfectly. Thanks for always commenting.^^

    Quote Originally Posted by Dark wolf View Post
    *gives surpised look* wow am surprised by an artist really good keep it up
    Most artists dont surprise you? I feel awsome now. Thanks Dark wolf, for your comment.

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