beast

Men in power wanted to break the Moon's ground.
Kaguya was the closest billion around.
They set it on a collision course and told the press,
But when all the dust settled on Selene's fortress
Not one weapon of mass destruction was found.

Im Suffering

wow this is a great poem. but there is one little thing bugging me. i didn't like the ending!
when i read "no weapon of mass destruction was found" i felt it just can't end there. just work a little on it.

beast

Thank you. The greatest compliment a writer can get as when people tell him they want more. I wrote this to improve my skills in classic limerick style. That is five lines, aabba, and of course humous subject matter. I did think of an ending for you though.

Men in power wanted to break the Moon's ground.
Kaguya was the closest billion around.
They set it on a collision course and told the press,
But when all the dust settled on Selene's fortress
Not one weapon of mass destruction was found.
No longer to Earth is are ravaging bound.

Artistic Anarchy

These short poems are always nice to read, well done.

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