Lush

This poem isn't new...but I hope you like it ^-^



The more I see your face
the better it gets.

There are times when I don't know
which heartbeat is mine and I
don't care about the time.

I'm reading over the lines
you've wrote and remembering your gold, green, and brown.

The more I hear your voice
the better it sounds.

There's a golden tree with
our names carved into it and
above it are some stars.

I want to know just how
perfect life with you can be,
will you show me?

I loved it really! It was just great! It was just so romantic really! I hope to see more! :D:

Nice poem, but shouldn't the title be lust? Unless you're describing what you see when you're drunk, LOL.

A lush is a super alchoholic. Lust is like love, except more sex less emotion. Just thought I'd point that out. Correct me if I'm wrong, LOL. ^_^

No...I mean't for it to be lush..because lush also means full of..or overflowing with. I am about to post a new poem if you would like to read it ^-^

omg i love your poem its very emotional and has very powerfull language

A very lovely poem,I really like it, it's very nice and full of love and the last lines makes it just perfect!!!! A wonderful work Kelly!!! ^^

The only thing that broke it off a lill for me was: "above it are some stars." sounds weird... some stars....

Anyways, a nice work ^^

Thankies ^-^...yeah my skill wasn't as advanced as it is now...my skill now isn't really that advanced...I am always improving :)

Lovely romantic poem absoultly perfect, i hear you skill is better woah thats me sorted wheres your next poem? 4/5 perfectly brilliant