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    Lust, The Wolf and the Dancing Blade.

    ( This one came quite weirdly enough.. I was in a mix of emotions and it just swayed into my head. )

    Tenderly we are ones to touch
    To where we find our passions
    ~Blush..

    And adorned with collars,
    Whips and chains
    Swayed we were and lived
    We did through days

    Days and days filled with flight
    Lust sensed farther fire's bright
    With espied fantasies a'gleam
    We watch for loins water'd clean

    Doubt we fill't with our tale a'told
    Let release of guised life knife'd so cold
    And laid to rest we let it run
    Our life blood draining with somber sun

    Inverse we see what truly is to be
    Predictions, depress'd supplement,
    Nurture blades and hate filled glades
    And let them dance,
    Upon your parliment's yield...
    For-from such pain
    And chaos played~
    Our desires return to be sealed

    Beckon the sly and ferocious wolf
    With dripping fangs fresh from the kill
    Taken into ones den of blight
    Alpha take thee in his own way
    Forever his you are still'd

    The wolf your lover, and you,
    The lost unfound within too,
    Release your desire
    And feed hell fire
    Let your mind become lost,
    In the blood red hue

    "Walk in with Reason, and leave with Passion."

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    Re: Lust, The Wolf and the Dancing Blade.

    Quote Originally Posted by Tetsanosuke Kirikami View Post

    Beckon the sly and ferocious wolf
    With dripping fangs fresh from the kill
    Taken into ones den of blight
    Alpha take thee in his own way
    Forever his you are still'd

    I must just say,WOW, for the whole poem. But This stanza is the one that I like the best. It's......*fans self*.....very good, puts a very vivid image in my mind.

    Over all it was very well written and nicely discripted. I liked how it was told, it had just the right amount of style and feel to it to make a wonderful impression on the readers mind. Nicely done.

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