Maimus

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As the door opened a roar could be heard
As the door opened a sweat from his brow
could be seen.
It was a game for them but not for him
death was a game he knew to well death
was his freind and it beckoned him on.
The sun now above him as he enter'ed the
arena the thunderouse crowd was not as loud
as his heart.
A blade is swung full of hatred and fear
the emperor now smiling knowing his fate
is now seald.
He battled and batteld yet noone came close
the emperor new smile now became worse
he looked to the emeperor with a glem in his eye
know he won and the crowd does not lie.
After hours of blood shed and a few tears as
well the emperor knew just hwat had to be done
the sun went down on a glorieouse day.
The final day had come the emperor was mad
he went to the pit and wonded that man
the blood now dripping as he hung there to die
the empere laughed thinking he was the best.
A new day has come and the emperor bost's
that he will slay the man that has never
known defeat.
They bring him in chains bleeding already
he is almost home with the one that he love's
a feirce battle insue's and the eperor lost .
as he lie daying the last words he heard were MAXIMUS!!!

ok this is sort of new for mewriting one like this
its peom but its also a story i combined both or
tried to anyway any comment's or pointer's will really
help. :thumb:

OMG!! That was sooooooooooooo awesome Chris H. :) I loved it. :) And I just love how it's a poem and a story all at once. :) Awesome job! :)

I love the title. I'd like to see some stanzas. It would give the poem a better flow in my opinion.

hey holder that was a kool poem man.