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    Make the air blue

    Lately, It would seem I've been pushing daisies,
    stretching them from roots to stem.

    What seemed so simple in those eyes of yours
    never is.

    Well, I've tried a thousand times to me the world
    see it my way, but they've shot me down without
    a sound.

    So we'll stand here embraced, tears running down
    our facem then we'll do it some other time once again.

    I never thought it would be this way,
    just me, you, and this empty world.

    You've spoken for me things I never would
    have thought to say.

    Sometimes I hear you laugh in the dead
    silence of my room while lying in the dark.

    Sometimes I see you lying next to me,
    eyes closed, breathing steady.

    Sometimes the tears won't stop,
    sometimes they just won't come around.
    Dear Dinah...

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    wow....depressing and strong words

    I really like it...Really sad/emotional and really well written!

    keep up the good work

    hope to hear more from you

    -Zainab

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    Re: Make the air blue

    Thank you
    I usually don't write depressing stuff...I haven't written in awhile so I didn't think I did that well on this one...but oh well.
    Dear Dinah...

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